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Godsend_1
Member

since 2001-04-19

Posts 247
great state of illinois

0 posted 2001-05-26 10:27 AM

ok i think i am just a wee bit silly but oh well i hope you all like this

Ben Redshaw the Great is back
i never even knew he left
but he did
and he returned
just as great as before
and maybe even a little better
wiser now i know that for sure
smarter to i think
he went away to who knows where
lost in pity and evil dead dreams
but back he is
trust me its true
the great one has returned
no not to torture or bother or hurt
but to make life all hunky dory
i love you all
and i mean that true
not just you or you or you
but all of you for your all my friends
and ya gotta love friends dearly too
well Ben Redshaw the Great is back
possibly ready to attack
but thats mean so nevermind
i will sit here and play tiddly winks
haha my friend this tale of my return is through
but one last final message
i love YOU

i am what i am and that is all that i am and all that i shall ever be..so deal with it
to make the world the greatest place is the perfect dream in

anonymous albert ?

Member Elite

since 2001-03-23

Posts 2979

1 posted 2001-05-26 03:34 PM

so how smart are you to be considered..."great"...i havent seen nothing that would be considered..."great"

...haha...just kidding...and if you is smart its not good booasting about it

...so anyways...i just had to let that out since i see you calling yourself haha..."great"...all the freaking time...but yea?...this was creative...thanks for the read and stop calling yourself..."the great"

...and always keep writing

...?

ahhhhh....i'm addicted to passions in poetry!!!!!

[This message has been edited by anonymous albert ? (edited 05-26-2001).]

punkrockerrobin

Senior Member

since 2001-05-15

Posts 1180
Sparks, NV

2 posted 2001-05-26 03:57 PM

albert hush! you're great to! ben love ya hun!
robin

I AM WHAT I AM SO DEAL!

Godsend_1
Member

since 2001-04-19

Posts 247
great state of illinois

3 posted 2001-05-26 08:01 PM

hey i have like the worst self esteem so i am allowed to call me self the great its just a joke anywho its my nickname from school its got a very long story behind it so no asking lol
ben redshaw the great out

i am what i am and that is all that i am and all that i shall ever be..so deal with it
to make the world the greatest place is the perfect dream in

Dopey Dope

Moderator

Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

4 posted 2001-05-26 08:50 PM

Well....welcome back Great Ben..

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

fearing-laughter
Senior Member

since 2001-04-24

Posts 605
land of cheese (Wisconsin)

5 posted 2001-05-27 01:32 AM

welcome back! lol i love you too. this was a very interesting poem...sorry it's late and i'm having trouble putting my thoughts together without the help of little dots...anywayz this was a greaaaaat poem.
-fear-

never_a_princess
Member

since 2001-06-09

Posts 82
Show Me the Money

6 posted 2001-06-10 04:03 PM

haha.."hunky dory' and "tiddly winks'..it sounds like Mr. Bennerz..*likes your title..Ben Redshaw the Great* :P anywayz..this was casual but cute..*hugz* good job bennerz
~Anna *waves*

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