Teen Poetry #4 |
The Watcher |
pharon Member
since 1999-11-13
Posts 251alabama |
Northern Lights awake beyond the stars The WATCHER rewardsheaven with laughing clouds |
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fozzyozzy Member
since 2001-03-15
Posts 336Lessburg Virginia |
God your stuff is awesome. I read it a couple times which is a good thing. You have an incredible skill to be short and succint but also obscure. Very nice very very nice fozzeozze "The heart can think of no devotion |
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fearing-laughter Senior Member
since 2001-04-24
Posts 605land of cheese (Wisconsin) |
heeeeey, i liked this, short but sweet. keep writin! -fear- |
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anonymous albert ?
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
yes!...once again...your sytle is graet...i liked this...thansk for sharing it...hope to see more... ...? ahhhhh....i'm addicted to passions in poetry!!!!! |
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anonymousfemale Member Elite
since 2000-02-02
Posts 2797Limbo |
This is very cool and quite unique. Short pieces that give such an effect are worthy of being printed off. Thanks for the read. ~AF~ Stupidity killed the cat. Curiosity was framed. |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
VERY well done. I love your poems. So deep and enlightening.....they make me ponder the worlds ways.....well.....they do! I really really love your poetry....keep posting. I am a fan. I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
very interesting words....made me reflect for a while.. hmmm...there is "rewards heaven", right? and i hope to witness the majesty of the Northern Lights one day |
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obscurity of cloud Member
since 2001-05-11
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This is so well written. You've done an incredible job; i really liked this. Keep posting! "so when at times the mob is swayed to carry praise or blame too far, we may choose something like a star" --Frost |
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