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Godsend_1
Member

since 2001-04-19

Posts 247
great state of illinois

0 posted 2001-05-24 10:09 PM

i sit silently in a corner
waiting for an answer
knowing i will get one someday
and all you do is mock
the waiting game i play
i hear your piercing laugh
and i ignore the hurt
again i revert
back to the former
the old
the formerly dead me
all cuz of a mocking laugh,
or a broken heart??

[This message has been edited by Godsend_1 (edited 05-26-2001).]

cherish
Senior Member

since 2001-03-25

Posts 1639
swimming in fairy floss...........

1 posted 2001-05-24 10:15 PM

awwwww....

...this is so sad...you wrote it so well i can feel the pain within it...well done..keep posting.

"Life is not long and boring,
it's short and compelling." -Javier Agosto-

MoeRocko
Member

since 2001-04-25

Posts 166
West Virginia

2 posted 2001-05-24 11:22 PM

I remember when I used to care

This Is Not Here

How do I know where to go when I don't know which way I'm facing

xShUgArHiGhx

Member Elite

since 2000-09-26

Posts 3150
tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs

3 posted 2001-05-24 11:52 PM

Your saddness was definately seeping through the poem...it sounds like u really poured all your hurt into this one...great job...feel better ::hugs::

anonymous albert ?

Member Elite

since 2001-03-23

Posts 2979

4 posted 2001-05-25 01:54 AM

sad..but written very well on your emotions...graet job and keep writin...

...?

if i die before i wake , i pray the lord my soul will take-"when thugs cry"

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

5 posted 2001-05-25 03:59 AM

Sad but nicely done. Hope things go well and post more.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

punkrockerrobin

Senior Member

since 2001-05-15

Posts 1180
Sparks, NV

6 posted 2001-05-25 04:05 AM

ben this was so sad

who been mocking you let me at em

Robin

nobody picks on my buddy ben!

I AM WHAT I AM SO DEAL!

[This message has been edited by poeticgirl01 (edited 05-25-2001).]

Acies

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Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-07

Posts 7665
Twilight Zone

7 posted 2001-05-29 02:19 PM

You shouldnt think too much on what others say. Specially people who don't particularly know you to start with. Be strong

I'm so sorry for doubting you Kit ... please forgive me!!!!

AngelPoet87
Member

since 2001-04-21

Posts 280
Indy

8 posted 2001-05-29 09:46 PM

Chin up, babe, don't let them get to you. I can feel the pain in this one, very strong writing. Try to be strong, yourself. Take care, we're all here for you. Super hugs.

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