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Godsend_1
Member

since 2001-04-19

Posts 247
great state of illinois

0 posted 2001-05-24 09:35 PM

look at me i am a little different
living in my new found house
not like i was before
better maybe
maybe worse
i dont know all i knwo is i am me
still at least i think i am
but oh well i will find me again
now that i am here
shall we play a new game
or maybe lets just up and dance
sing maybe
maybe prance
ok maybe not but what ever you want
what time to go
aww you sure
ok well i will see you later
have a life so grand
and maybe we will me again later
tomorrow sounds good to
bye and i hope you can find you way back
to my new found house

[This message has been edited by Godsend_1 (edited 05-24-2001).]

pharon
Member

since 1999-11-13

Posts 251
alabama

1 posted 2001-05-24 10:33 PM

ok...i have to say i liked this one..it was a tad bit confusing, but then again it made me read it three times...so good job!

me

anonymous albert ?

Member Elite

since 2001-03-23

Posts 2979

2 posted 2001-05-25 01:25 AM

this poem was nice...graet job ben...but too much going back and forth in your meaning in writing got a little tiring otheer then that keep writing...