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Teen Poetry #4

Love

Terryloveiris_85
Member

since 2001-04-23

Posts 61
The middle of nowhere

0 posted 2001-05-24 07:34 PM

Longing for the love
Oppressing myself with worry
Valuing every minute
Energy is needed to make it complete

i'd give eternity to be by your side-goo goo dolls/City of Angels soundtrack

goodness is found in the heart, not the money.

anonymous albert ?

Member Elite

since 2001-03-23

Posts 2979

1 posted 2001-05-24 07:41 PM

very emotional...put into such simple form...great job...i enjoyed this poem greatly...hope to see more...

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if i die before i wake , i pray the lord my soul will take-"when thugs cry"

cherish
Senior Member

since 2001-03-25

Posts 1639
swimming in fairy floss...........

2 posted 2001-05-24 09:52 PM

Energy is needed to make it complete..
*shakes her head*...true..so very true...*sigh*

"Life is not long and boring,
it's short and compelling." -Javier Agosto-

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

3 posted 2001-05-25 03:57 AM

Yes short but nicely done.
I enjoyed.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

katherine
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since 2000-06-10

Posts 365
Canberra Australia

4 posted 2001-05-25 08:09 AM

i liked the way it was short it worked well.
i liked this it's good and true.
kate

if you don't let them in they can't see the real you

Jenn Cirrincione

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since 2000-07-02

Posts 2107
Fl

5 posted 2001-05-25 02:57 PM

Short, simple. Yet emotional. Keep writng them, I'll keep reading them

"If it's wrong to love you, then my heart just won't let me be right, cause I'm drowned in you, and I won't pull through without you by my side." Mari

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