Teen Poetry #4 |
Love Is |
CwboyAtHeart Senior Member
since 2001-04-14
Posts 541Selah, WA, USA |
This is one that I originally wrote with a Christian theme to it... But then I looked over it, and decided that I could change it to be more the way I feel... Anyhow, let me know what you think! LOVE IS Love is patient, it's kind, it's true It's never angered, proud or rude It does not envy, does not boast But always seems to keep its hope Love keeps no record of our wrongs It rejoices in truth; sings many songs It's never self-seeking of its worth Always open to giving you new birth Love is you always on my mind Me not leaving you far behind Love was you saying yes to me When I realized all that we could be Love was me when I fell for you When I didn't know just what to do Love is what I feel when our eyes meet It's in that sweet kiss when we greet Love wasn't in the way that you walked away When you slowly left me that day Love wasn't in the way we had to part But love will always be in my heart *It was supposed to be a love poem... supposed to be all mushy and sweet and stuff... But I guess it kinda ended otherwise, huh? Hate when that happens.* - Cody - Living From Memories Living From Thoughts There Are Some Things In Live That Cannot Be Taught [This message has been edited by CwboyAtHeart (edited 05-24-2001).] |
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anonymous albert ?
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
beautiful images of love...graet job on writing this...very positive...hope to see more... ...? if i die before i wake , i pray the lord my soul will take-"when thugs cry" |
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Suga_Baby Member
since 2000-08-06
Posts 380Maine, USA |
Wow! I didn't expect such a sad ending to such a sweet poem... what a twist! Good job! "A dream is a wish your heart makes while you are fast asleep." |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
I liekd this one a lot....although the flow was a bit choppy in a few spots, you did very well on this one. One of my fav from you....VERY good thoughts here. I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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zarina Member
since 2001-05-19
Posts 180 |
I don't know why, but I didn't like this poem that much.. It was well written, so no offence to you....but, well, none of my favorites. |
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