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CwboyAtHeart
Senior Member

since 2001-04-14

Posts 541
Selah, WA, USA

0 posted 2001-05-24 06:38 PM

This is one that I originally wrote with a Christian theme to it... But then I looked over it, and decided that I could change it to be more the way I feel... Anyhow, let me know what you think!

LOVE IS

Love is patient, it's kind, it's true
It's never angered, proud or rude
It does not envy, does not boast
But always seems to keep its hope

Love keeps no record of our wrongs
It rejoices in truth; sings many songs
It's never self-seeking of its worth
Always open to giving you new birth

Love is you always on my mind
Me not leaving you far behind
Love was you saying yes to me
When I realized all that we could be

Love was me when I fell for you
When I didn't know just what to do
Love is what I feel when our eyes meet
It's in that sweet kiss when we greet

Love wasn't in the way that you walked away
When you slowly left me that day
Love wasn't in the way we had to part
But love will always be in my heart

*It was supposed to be a love poem...  supposed to be all mushy and sweet and stuff...  But I guess it kinda ended otherwise, huh?  Hate when that happens.*

      - Cody -

Living From Memories
Living From Thoughts
There Are Some Things In Live
That Cannot Be Taught

[This message has been edited by CwboyAtHeart (edited 05-24-2001).]

anonymous albert ?

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since 2001-03-23

Posts 2979

1 posted 2001-05-24 06:54 PM

beautiful images of love...graet job on writing this...very positive...hope to see more...

...?

if i die before i wake , i pray the lord my soul will take-"when thugs cry"

Suga_Baby
Member

since 2000-08-06

Posts 380
Maine, USA

2 posted 2001-05-24 09:44 PM

Wow! I didn't expect such a sad ending to such a sweet poem... what a twist! Good job!

"A dream is a wish your heart makes while you are fast asleep."

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

3 posted 2001-05-25 03:51 AM

I liekd this one a lot....although the flow was a bit choppy in a few spots, you did very well on this one. One of my fav from you....VERY good thoughts here.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

zarina
Member

since 2001-05-19

Posts 180

4 posted 2001-05-25 06:38 AM

I don't know why, but I didn't like this poem that much.. It was well written, so no offence to you....but, well, none of my favorites.

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