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sweetstuff101 Member
since 2000-07-27
Posts 375OK, USA 
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You still don't know I smile at you, you smile at me I have all these feelings, You cannot see I'm not sure why I fell for you But there is one thing that is certainly true When I see you from across the room, I can't help how I feel This isn't just another hopeless crush, These feelings are real. Your like a gift God sent to me Your so perfect This I can see How can I tell you? How do I let you know? I need you, Please don't go Maybe I'm too shy, Or I don't know what to do, But you still don't know That I'm crazy for you. Hey guys I'm back!! Scary huh?? Well I thought it was! This poem I just wrote like an hour ago...it's not great, but I tried! Thanx for reading it tho!! Luv Always, Priscilla How come it is so easy for a person to say "I hate you," but it is so difficult for someone to say "I love you" and really mean it???? |
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litle_krazy_poet Member
since 2001-01-17
Posts 71 |
 welcome back brovo brovo  i loved the poem. i know how you feel the girl that i love i can't be with(her father)but i hope thing get better and welcome back somethings need poems and then there are thoes that are just for fun |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
for some reason, my aunt gets these YM magazines monthly i guess it used to be for my uncle's med office well, i read this Feb's issue and in there has "how to get a date by friday"  could help, maybe kidding aside...... hey, it's great to see you back I've been wondering about you...i thought you left us for good  nice to see you again....that mean 1 more reply to my poems lol j/kPriscilla, one thing, go ask him you'll never know if you don't great read...thanks I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
You know, I wish women would write this kinda stuff about me. It'd make me feel special and all. Oh well.....nice one here!  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I'm in love with my shadow I admire it daily |
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IsGona Senior Member
since 2000-07-14
Posts 723 |
umm.. your welcome, but it was my pleasure. nice to see you back. This was very nice poem. And I feel ya dopey. No body ever writes this stuff for me... Oh well. Nice work sweet stuff Look forward to seeing more ~Jason "Every body has their destiny... I'LL CHOOSE MY OWN ~Hatebreed~ |
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sweetypie5 Member
since 2000-10-06
Posts 97MWC,OK,USA |
Hey wassup sweetstuff!!! I know what you are going through!!! Believe me!!! I also have to agree with dopey...except I want a GUY to write something like this about me!!! That would be sooo sweet!!! Welcome back!!! I just returning too!!! Hehe....great poem..it flowed really well!!! You are a great poet and don't think that you arn't!! I wish I could write as well as some of the other ppl in here...including you!!! Buh bye and Peace Out!!! *~*Hope is a walking dream*~* *~*Don't take life too seriosly~~~you'll never get out alive*~* |
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Jenn Cirrincione
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl |
Welcome back!! This is so common and so real. I hate when that stuff happens... uck. Anyway, it was really well written, and stick around for a while, ok? xoxo Jenn "A person can never get over a broken heart if they aren't willing to let go of all of the pieces."-- ?? |
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sweetstuff101 Member
since 2000-07-27
Posts 375OK, USA |
Thanx for the replies guys!! < !signature-->Lil krazy~ thanx~a~mundo! It's really hard not being able to be w/ the one you love, isn't it?? It hurts so much!! acire~ Hey maybe it might help! J/k! I'm not that desperate! I will ask him...when it's the right time. But I hardly ever see him...so it's really hard to find that right time. I will probably ask him about it this summer. I know it's ridiculous to wait that long, but I only see him once a week, and once school is out I will start talking to hima whole lot more, because neither of us will be quite as busy and then maybe I will feel more comfortable asking him about it...I don't know...I'm just sooo confused! Dopey~ Ur so sweet! I don't know why ppl don't write stuff for you! But if it makes you feel any better...no one writes anything for me either Thanx anyway!Isgona~ Thank YOU too! and most of that stuff I said to Dopey applies to you too!! *sniffles* no one ever writes stuff for me :'( Oh well...I guess I'll just have to get over it! Steph~ Not much up here, u??? I know that you know about it...duh you hear about it everyday! Ur practically livin it! You can't leave the guy part out...cuz I wrote stuff for you before! Just not like you know...luv stuff...cuz I'm sorry I'm just not that way!! And what are you talking about?? You write wwaaaaaaayyy better than me! You make my work wreak!! PS~ Il est TRES TRES BEAU!!! Jenn~ Thanx! Yeah it does happen to everyone....doesn't it?? And it always hurts! Much luv, Priscilla How come it is so easy for a person to say "I hate you," but it is so difficult for someone to say "I love you" and really mean it???? [This message has been edited by sweetstuff101 (edited 01-26-2001).] |
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