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DarkSilver
Junior Member

since 2001-05-21

Posts 33
Six O'clock High!

0 posted 2001-05-24 02:31 PM

“Her”

Hair as black as midnight.
Voice as sweet as sugar.
Smile brighter than the sun.
Eyes as deep and powerful as the ocean.
How did I overlook her?
Where were my eyes?
I cannot understand.
I look in the mirror and think,
“How do I dare to feel this way?”
I must be insane, to love her.
If this is crazy, send me to the asylum.
Difference, I mourn mine.
Difference, I cannot get enough of hers.
Yes, I have lost my mind,
And I don’t want to find it!

P.S. This one is about a diffrent girl.

It doesn't matter who you are only who you serve. - Draken O'Larn, the Starwarrior Saga

xShUgArHiGhx

Member Elite

since 2000-09-26

Posts 3150
tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs

1 posted 2001-05-24 02:34 PM

Wow this was very good. Sounds like u really gotta thing for this one! You described her with such beautiful words...excellent

anonymous albert ?

Member Elite

since 2001-03-23

Posts 2979

2 posted 2001-05-24 04:08 PM

beautiful poem...and interetsing read...i really liked it and hope to see more...thanks for sharing it...

...?

if i die before i wake , i pray the lord my soul will take-"when thugs cry"

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

3 posted 2001-05-24 05:08 PM

Well done here, and about a dif. girl? HOw many girls are there?
Well anyway, i liked this one.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

chasing rain
Senior Member

since 2001-05-15

Posts 737
Canada

4 posted 2001-05-25 12:46 PM

So, this is...#8, is it? *checks of next girl* lol, i'm just kidding.

I really thought the part where you talked about differences was well said. Good job geo!

Very effective. Hope to see more!

"If I find in myself desires which nothing in this world can satisfy, the only logical explanation is that i was made for another world."
-C.S.Lewis

anonymousfemale
Member Elite

since 2000-02-02

Posts 2797
Limbo

5 posted 2001-05-25 03:38 AM

"I look in the mirror and think,
“How do I dare to feel this way?”"
These were my favourite lines in the entire piece because it really does explain everything.

Nicely done.

~AF~

Stupidity killed the cat. Curiosity was framed.
~ Unknown ~

DarkSilver
Junior Member

since 2001-05-21

Posts 33
Six O'clock High!

6 posted 2001-05-26 05:07 PM

the first one I posted was written quite a bit back. this one was more recent and for your information, LEAH (you rotten bannana), Right now no one girl is occupying all my interest.

It doesn't matter who you are only who you serve. - Draken O'Larn, the Starwarrior Saga

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