Teen Poetry #4 |
Hopless |
HeAvEnS AnGeL Member
since 2001-05-17
Posts 168The Hot Girl From Canada |
I reach out for you, To find that your not there. Are you feeding lies to me? when I cry do you even care? Does it even bother you, That I'm in so much pain? From this situation, I have nothing t gain. But I can't turn my feelings off, Unlike you I care so much I wish I could be with you I am longing for your touch. Im so unsure of things right now, And I'm sure that you are too. But I hope that in the future, I can be with you. When I kiss you it hurts, Because I know that your not mine. But when you ask me what is wrong, I lie and say I'm fine. I'm sick of chasing you around, Forever I will not wait. I don't want to stay around, To hear my awful fate. So whenver you are ready, You can come and find me. You dont want a girlfriend, So I will have to let you be. |
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anonymous albert ?
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
Ashley...this was a heartfelt poem...great job on writing this...i really liked it...hope everythings alright tho...as this was a sad situation...but thanks for sharing and hope to see more... ...? if i die before i wake , i pray the lord my soul will take-"when thugs cry" |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Unrequited love is the worst feeling....but you will find a man who will love you back sometime soon. Good luck....and this poem was pretty good. I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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xShUgArHiGhx
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
This was extremely heartfelt and you all your hurt was seeped into the poem. Excellent job and I hope things get better ::Hugs:: |
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zarina Member
since 2001-05-19
Posts 180 |
what can I say? wonderful poem.. You're not the only one feeling this way.. I hope things works out for you |
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lonely*soul Member
since 2001-04-05
Posts 396east haddam (moodus) ct :) |
wow i know the feeling too much...you put everything that needed to be said in this pome, great job *KiMMiE* |
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