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pharon
Member

since 1999-11-13

Posts 251
alabama

0 posted 2001-05-23 10:53 PM

POWERFUL silence
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electronic
  Hellinmotion

living with imposters
living with imposter
souls
      unconscious
      of      the

borrowed
               LIGHT

52301

[This message has been edited by pharon (edited 05-24-2001).]

fozzyozzy
Member

since 2001-03-15

Posts 336
Lessburg Virginia

1 posted 2001-05-23 11:01 PM

Whoa this is really neat and interesting. I like this style. Keep it comin Pharon

"The heart can think of no devotion
Greater than being shore to ocean
Holding the curve of one position
Counting an endless repetition"
Robert Fr

cherish
Senior Member

since 2001-03-25

Posts 1639
swimming in fairy floss...........

2 posted 2001-05-23 11:06 PM

wow...very interesting i have got to admit!!!...job well done..i like the way youre forced to read each word out....great emphisis!!!

"Life is not long and boring,
it's short and compelling." -Javier Agosto-

anonymous albert ?

Member Elite

since 2001-03-23

Posts 2979

3 posted 2001-05-24 12:42 PM

very creative and interetsing that caught my eyes...i really liked it...thanks for the different read...i needed it...hope to see more...

...?

if i die before i wake , i pray the lord my soul will take-"when thugs cry"

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

4 posted 2001-05-24 03:43 AM

AWESOME POEM!
I loved the way you did it....simply loved this one. One of my favorite by you.
I hope to see more of this style!

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

pharon
Member

since 1999-11-13

Posts 251
alabama

5 posted 2001-05-24 10:18 PM

hey you guys...i added a line and an extra line-space...did it make a difference?

me

Fading Away

Member Elite

since 2001-03-14

Posts 3131
Lynchburg, Virginia

6 posted 2001-06-16 01:37 PM

This poem ROCKS! Maybe one of the best formats I've seen ever here. VERY impressive, Pharon. I LOVED the way you did "Streaming through the crowd." That was very creative. Wowers, This one's going to the library. Nice work.

--Marie

"You're the girl of my nightmares.
You're an Anorexic Beauty, feather-weight perfection. Anorexic Beauty, underweight goddess." -- Pulp