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HeAvEnS AnGeL
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since 2001-05-17

Posts 168
The Hot Girl From Canada

0 posted 2001-05-23 06:18 PM

Goodbye's are always sad,
But forever they are not.
Even though I'm empty now,
I must cherish what I've got.

God took you away,
To the sweet heavens above.
He wanted the best angel,
To spread the gift of love.

Sometimes I may cry,
Because I miss you so much.
I know you always with me,
But I want to feel your touch.

Again one day I will be with you,
And never will we part.
But for now your up in heaven,
And forever in my heart.

This poem was written for my grandmother, and my cousin who passed away this year. I love, and I miss you Heaps.
Grandma: always remember i am always going to be your "brown eyed girl."
And Baby cody: Don't worry hun I'm always smiling.

corey14
Member

since 2001-05-23

Posts 89
Boston, Mass, U.S.A.

1 posted 2001-05-23 06:26 PM

thats a good pome and i no how u feel i had 2 say good bye 2 a girl i love but u will find love somewear
if ur younger y not start with me

anonymous albert ?

Member Elite

since 2001-03-23

Posts 2979

2 posted 2001-05-23 06:30 PM

this was a nice tribute...u wrote it so well followed by ur sincere emotions i enjoyed the read and thanks for sharing it with us...

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if i die before i wake , i pray the lord my soul will take-"when thugs cry"

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

3 posted 2001-05-23 07:04 PM

Well done. I liked this poem. So sad.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

4 posted 2001-05-23 08:00 PM

I hope you know this completely touched my heart.....I have an Aunt who recently passed....and sometimes I ache wishing I could hear her laughter.....she was and will forever be my hero....this is going into my library....

SEA

HeAvEnS AnGeL
Member

since 2001-05-17

Posts 168
The Hot Girl From Canada

5 posted 2001-05-24 12:18 PM

lol corey you probably live miles away but kisses anyways. im glad so many of you liked this poem thanks

xShUgArHiGhx

Member Elite

since 2000-09-26

Posts 3150
tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs

6 posted 2001-05-24 08:09 AM

Beautifully written...good job hun

Your emotions were expressed well in this.

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