Teen Poetry #4 |
Find no comfort in the cross |
Kevin
since 1999-11-02
Posts 729Torrington, Ct, Usa |
Find no comfort in the cross Answers for me it holds not Speak to me and of my loss Do not read a dead mans thoughts Find no comfort in my mind Stand and stare into the rain Wonder how to leave behind Wonder whats the use of pain Find no comfort in tomorrow Pinned down by my yesterday Lost in dwelling on my sorrow Lost in what the others say Find no comfort in the healing Scars deny....no use pretending That this long forgotten feeling Stands a chance of ever ending |
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lonely*soul Member
since 2001-04-05
Posts 396east haddam (moodus) ct :) |
wow kevin i havent read much by you..but this was awsome! i really liked it and it leaves a lasting immpression good job! *KiMMiE* |
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LoveBug
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Member Elite
since 2000-01-08
Posts 4697 |
Some really powerful words there, my friend. This is very well written and full of sadness and anger. These emotions come across really well. I hope things get better for you, though. Thanks for sharing. "Men judge generally more by the eye than by the hand, for everyone can see and few can feel."-Machiavelli |
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Kevin
since 1999-11-02
Posts 729Torrington, Ct, Usa |
thanks guys....CT!!! WOOHOO |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Your flow is wonderful. I loved this piece Kevin!!! You are one of my favorite writers on here. It's always good to see a poem by you. I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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Master Senior Member
since 1999-08-18
Posts 1867Boston, MA |
hmm... honestly? it's so-so... but that's because I'm used to seeing better ones from ya... Keep posting! You're still da man! |
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anonymous albert ?
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
awesome job...i enjoyed this poem...overall...great poem...hope to see more... ...? if i die before i wake , i pray the lord my soul will take-"when thugs cry" |
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