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Poet on Acid Member
since 2001-01-07
Posts 325Florida, USA |
Sorry, but this poem has been deleted due to the violation of Passion guidelines [This message has been edited by acire (edited 01-25-2001).] |
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Jenn Cirrincione
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl |
You're correct. I don't think this will remain. However, it is really sad. Just so sad. I hope you don't truly feel like that. Even though the poem was depressing, it does show true talent, so keep writing.  xoxo Jenn "A person can never get over a broken heart if they aren't willing to let go of all of the pieces."-- ?? |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Well before this gets blahed out.......nice one here.......i liked it.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I'm in love with my shadow I admire it daily |
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Poet on Acid Member
since 2001-01-07
Posts 325Florida, USA |
I'm gald it's not total trash, but as for the moderaters taking things such as this down I don't believe that a forum can be allowed to have true creative freedom when the people are forced to be creative while only writing about the "good" things in life. It really does show a one sided story of the world, but I can understand why they do not wish such things to be posted. And since this is THEIR forum the have the right to say what is allowed and whats not as well as the responsibility to keep it clean. Man I really hate my objective views of situations at times...anyways thanx for taking the time to read the poem. And Jenn, thanx for your concern, yeah I do feel like that but not all the time. Just a passing thought about my life. < !signature--> >¶Øʆ< [This message has been edited by Poet on Acid (edited 01-24-2001).] |
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ThyWizard Member
since 2000-08-06
Posts 56Chambersburg, PA, USA |
I agree with you on the freedom thought, but we can't do anything about it. Excellent piece tho, nice imagery In himself he is confiding Inside himself he is hiding All his time he is biding LOVED that part, excellent way of putting him inside himself.. " How can i feel if i can't breathe..." - Godsmack Tryps '01 |
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anomaly187 Member
since 2000-06-15
Posts 284San Francisco,CA,US |
the moderators must be going right..when i was first here they weren't condeming posts so much...and as for your post it's definately not trash..great work "When the going gets weird, the weird turn pro" |
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