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~*brittt*~
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since 2001-05-09

Posts 76
East Haddam, CT

0 posted 2001-05-22 08:55 AM

One day I think I love you
The next day I know I don't
I'm hoping to get over you,
But I know I won't

So slowly I give in
And I tell you how I feel
But when I ask you to respond
"Her" name is all I hear.

What makes her so much better?
Is it her body,face or eyes?
Why is it that no one else
Sees past her disquise?

I've wasted so much time on you
Hoping you would come around,
But you always build me up...
And then you let me down.

So I guess I should give up
Though it's the last thing I want to do
You may be done with my emotions
But my heart will always feel for you.

vixengrl04
Member

since 2001-04-26

Posts 495
East Haddam, CT

1 posted 2001-05-22 09:46 AM

Britt this is sad. I've noticed that almost all of your poems are about "G" or "K" and I really think it would be best for you to, like the title of this piece, let go. If they were worth your time (and heart) then why is it that they always trigger you to write such painful poems about them?? And another thing I've noticed in this piece and another of yours, is that the whole poem seems to be about how the person has hurt you so bad, yet at the last line you say something like "But my heart will always feel for you." Hun, in my humble opinion neither of them deserve any space in your heart. You need to realize that you are way too good for them, and please don't waste your time with ppl that you KNOW will hurt you (and don't say you dont know-you do). Be careful, and be cautious with whom you give your heart to. I luv ya lots!!

~*Nikki*~

~*Of all the millions of people in the world, I'm just me.*~

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

2 posted 2001-05-22 11:23 AM

I have been there.....it hurts.....major sympathy for ya.....hugs

SEA

Suga_Baby
Member

since 2000-08-06

Posts 380
Maine, USA

3 posted 2001-05-22 02:42 PM

This is awesome! I really enjoyed it

,
Suga

"A dream is a wish your heart makes while you are fast asleep."

Allysa

Senior Member

since 1999-11-09

Posts 1952
In an upside-down garden

4 posted 2001-05-22 04:17 PM

been there. Oh boy have I been there. I'm there right now. But there's no other girl in the situation. Only me and him. Well, hope things get better.

I know you're in a better place and though I cannot see your face, I know you're smiling down on me, saying everything's okay. ~R Kelly (I wish)

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

5 posted 2001-05-22 09:01 PM

This was so sad. I really hope that things are getting better for you and if not then i hope they do.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

anonymous albert ?

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since 2001-03-23

Posts 2979

6 posted 2001-05-23 02:23 AM

this is sad and u wrote it so well...i wish u the best and ur lifes situations...hope to see more...

...?

if i die before i wake , i pray the lord my soul will take-"when thugs cry"

punkrockerrobin

Senior Member

since 2001-05-15

Posts 1180
Sparks, NV

7 posted 2001-05-23 03:26 AM

omg this is exactlly how i feel towards my wow! he likes my best friend but he don't like me no more but i won't give up. tks girly for the poem.
robin

I AM WHAT I AM SO DEAL!

TearsOfPearls
Member

since 1999-09-23

Posts 322
Vereeniging, South-Africa

8 posted 2001-05-23 01:59 PM

This is so sad, but i think it would be better for you to just...let go, for your own good

Planning big can be a gamble...I have already rolled the dice!

xShUgArHiGhx

Member Elite

since 2000-09-26

Posts 3150
tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs

9 posted 2001-05-24 02:46 PM

This really was sad...i hope everything turns out well in the end ::hugs::

Spice
Senior Member

since 2001-04-13

Posts 1266
Resting in my cardboard box.

10 posted 2001-05-24 03:32 PM

Oh my, I've been there before...twice actually. It's a *horrible* situation to be in. Trust me- you'll find the person isn't worth the pain in the end...though it's VERY hard to let go. You wrote great! The poem showed your feelings and thoughts perfectly. I hope things get better for you. =)

HeAvEnS AnGeL
Member

since 2001-05-17

Posts 168
The Hot Girl From Canada

11 posted 2001-05-24 07:28 PM

gosh. I know this feeling all to well.

here is a short little poem for you

You will always sit and wonder
What does she have that I dont?
Becoz I want to go out with him, but he wont.
but what she has that you don't
My dear is so very clear,
You have heart, body, soul, and mind.
So dont let this foolish boy waiste your time

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