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niceguy Member
since 2000-11-13
Posts 113Sapello, NM, USA |
Sorry... I never knew, never took the time to see; Your feelings for me. But your chance has come and gone; We can not be. I've found another, one who cares; So now you must move on. I'm sorry. "Don't take love for granted...once it's gone, it hurts." |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
This was great. But damn, what an unfortunate situation. I hope all gets better and whoever you left heals healthy.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I'm in love with my shadow I admire it daily |
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niceguy Member
since 2000-11-13
Posts 113Sapello, NM, USA |
Thanx Dopey. It's not as bad as it sounds. I just found out that a friend of mine likes me but I have a G/F and she knows this but asked me to prom anyway. So I was all confused and when I am confused and stuff I write and this is what came out. Glad that you liked it. And I think she will be fine. Thanx for the concern. Laterz. "Don't take love for granted...once it's gone, it hurts." |
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litle_krazy_poet Member
since 2001-01-17
Posts 71 |
grate poem and it does suck for that person but rember that one can always be some one to becom goods firends with, well good luck somethings need poems and then there are thoes that are just for fun |
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Jenn Cirrincione
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl |
Nice poem.... however, Grrrrr!! I hate situations like this. Uck!! Maybe there will come a time for you two.  xoxo Jenn "A person can never get over a broken heart if they aren't willing to let go of all of the pieces."-- ?? |
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katherine Member
since 2000-06-10
Posts 365Canberra Australia |
great poem!! hope it all works out for you |
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Pixie-Babe03 Member
since 2000-08-29
Posts 387Central Maine |
this it a great read sorry about the sitch though! hope to see more of your work soon |
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niceguy Member
since 2000-11-13
Posts 113Sapello, NM, USA |
Thank you for all your replies everyone. Means a lot that you took the time to read it. And I think that things will work out okay. Thanx for all the concern and praise. "Don't take love for granted...once it's gone, it hurts." |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
I agree with Jenn maybe in the future don't close the door on her though and say her chance has come and gone all i'm saying is, you never know  I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR |
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niceguy Member
since 2000-11-13
Posts 113Sapello, NM, USA |
Yeah...I agree with Jen too acire. And I won't close the door on her...right now things have got pretty interesting and theres a good chance that they are going to move in a good direction. thanx for the reply. Laterz! "Don't take love for granted...once it's gone, it hurts." |
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xShUgArHiGhx
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
I hope things work out for the better. Its a shame that you found out too late about that persons feelings towards you....Good poem! |
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Angel in Flight Member
since 2001-01-07
Posts 381 |
WOW!!! Wonderful poem you showed your feelings very well, but what a sad ending. Not everything is ment to be as you have shown us all today. Great poem and keep writing always. ~Amanda~ What comes with love are tears of pain. What comes with hate are brighter days~ Amanda |
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