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LoneWolf
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0 posted 2001-05-20 09:36 PM


“Hope”

Shining down from the skies above
Whispering sweet words of love
Pervading through the darkest night
Showing me a way through my plight

On the edge of sanity
Longing for your touch to set me free
Bowing down for all to behold
As my oath, to you is told

Praying through the shadows
While I fight all these battles
One thought and I shall fight
Onward will I go with all my might

Words are heard upon the wind
The vine that holds all to great ends
Looking for something to grasp
I find my dreams of you
And I find hope


It's too bad I'm not as wonderful a person as people say I am, because the world could use a few people like that.
I've learned that even when you th

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mistic
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1 posted 2001-05-20 09:37 PM


i really liked the image that you created here  
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2 posted 2001-05-20 10:03 PM


Well done here. I really enjoyed this one!
Well done!

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

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3 posted 2001-05-20 10:19 PM


nice imagery...i enjoyed it...thanks for sharing and keep writing... ...?

if i die before i wake , i pray the lord my soul will take-"when thugs cry"

LoneWolf
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4 posted 2001-05-20 11:56 PM


thank you all for the replies. i truely appreciate what you say.

It's too bad I'm not as wonderful a person as people say I am, because the world could use a few people like that.
I've learned that even when you th

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