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MoeRocko
Member

since 2001-04-25

Posts 166
West Virginia

0 posted 2001-05-20 07:25 PM

I have seen faded eyes
I've touched the lifeless hand
Of a precious passing love one
It was hard to understand

But the only thought that cheered me
and helped to see me through
is
We'll shake hands in that land
where all things are new
Where the withered flowers bloom again
In the garden of God
We'll walk together hand in hand
Where feet have never trod

I have a precious father
he's been a great man
Time has dimmed his vision
and put a trembling in his hand
When his foot steps falter
I keep this thought in view
That we'll shake hands in that land
Where all things are New

~Inspired by Tiff's "I Hold Your hand"~

This Is Not Here

How do I know where to go when I don't know which way I'm facing

HoldingBack
New Member

since 2001-05-20

Posts 2

1 posted 2001-05-20 07:26 PM

This was a really nice poem, MoeRocko. I really enjoyed it.

knightlyshadows
Senior Member

since 2001-04-14

Posts 791
obscured vision

2 posted 2001-05-20 07:44 PM

thats great ewok! u did a wonderful job on this. i love it! makes me all teary eyed cuz its sayads but the knowing of cing them again in that land...its awesome!
you worded this very well! and you did a great job! woo hoo for u ewoksters!

awwww@it bein inspireds by mes

love you muchs! tiff

“A single choice can build destinies,or destroy them.”

I want to look into your eyes and see you smile at me
I want to hear you say "Well done"

[This message has been edited by knightlyshadows (edited 05-20-2001).]

lonely*soul
Member

since 2001-04-05

Posts 396
east haddam (moodus) ct :)

3 posted 2001-05-20 07:53 PM

wow...tiff should sure feel honored inspiring a great poem like this

*KiMMiE*

Dopey Dope

Moderator

Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

4 posted 2001-05-20 08:33 PM

Well done here moe.....I really enjoyed this, and yes....it's always an honor to inspire somebody, so tiff should get some credit on this one..hehe.
Well done though.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

anonymous albert ?

Member Elite

since 2001-03-23

Posts 2979

5 posted 2001-05-20 11:19 PM

powerful and meaningful...i liekd it a lot...u have written it well...great job...

...?

if i die before i wake , i pray the lord my soul will take-"when thugs cry"

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