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Sabriel.s.h.lover
Member

since 2001-04-16

Posts 73
b.f.e. aka- Hickville

0 posted 2001-05-20 05:45 PM

The worse experience,
in my life.
Happened.

You were there.
I was there.
Should have been perfect.

But,(sigh) it wasn't.
You were there, yes.
But not for me.

You were there for her.
Not me.
Broke my heart.

It happened so fast.
It happened so badly.
I wanted to cry.

I did cry.
And you weren't there,
To dry my tears.

Those red hot tears,
streamed down my face.
And even then I saw you.

With her...........

So many books, so little time
She and I are nothing alike, your confusing day with night.~Dream~girlband

Spine Grinder
Senior Member

since 2000-10-28

Posts 1127
Standing In Silence...

1 posted 2001-05-20 05:49 PM

This was sad. I hope you'll be okay *hugs* this was very emotional.

good job

Dopey Dope

Moderator

Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

2 posted 2001-05-20 08:25 PM

So sad.....so so sad. Well done though. You expressed your emotions very well.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

anonymous albert ?

Member Elite

since 2001-03-23

Posts 2979

3 posted 2001-05-20 10:17 PM

great job on this...its is a sad situation...hope things are alright for u...

if i die before i wake , i pray the lord my soul will take-"when thugs cry"

xShUgArHiGhx

Member Elite

since 2000-09-26

Posts 3150
tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs

4 posted 2001-05-21 10:44 PM

This is so sad hun...feel better!!

Allan Riverwood

Member Elite

since 2001-01-04

Posts 3502
Winnipeg

5 posted 2001-05-22 06:37 PM

I enjoyed this poem quite a bit. I especially like how you used "(sigh)", it really had a very nice element about it that altered the flow to sound more as though it was someone talking, as opposed to being read.
The situation isn't one to be admired, but I appreciate the emotions herein. You did a marvelous job penning it.

~Allan

Build a man a fire, and he's warm for a day. Set a man on fire, and he'll be warm for the rest of his life.
~Unknown

HeAvEnS AnGeL
Member

since 2001-05-17

Posts 168
The Hot Girl From Canada

6 posted 2001-05-22 07:03 PM

"tears" :.( this was a sad poem but very nicely written. I know what that's like and trust me hun, your heart will heal, and the next hottie will come around and things will work out, so i say :P to that guy

Terryloveiris_85
Member

since 2001-04-23

Posts 61
The middle of nowhere

7 posted 2001-05-22 08:42 PM

Wow i could really relate to this one.There's this guy,I have a really hard time trying not to like him but it just won't stop coming so I just go with the flow!
sometimes he acts like a total jerk,

but I still can't help but love him.*SIGHS* But I guess that's how love is.

~Iris

i'd give eternity to be by your side-goo goo dolls/City of Angels soundtrack

goodness is found in the heart, not the money.

[This message has been edited by Terryloveiris_85 (edited 05-22-2001).]

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