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Zombie Man
Member

since 1999-06-22

Posts 52
Va

0 posted 2001-05-19 11:00 PM

I remember there was a time, that I was so sweet.
There was not a thing in the world that could hurt me.
And now my life, has a new story to tell.
I wish I could have the love that lives in you.
Instead I stand here, praying for your life.
Hoping that you will be true.
I never wanna close my eyes.
I can't stop looking at how beauitful you are.
Now im afraid of living without you.
I just wanna be with you.
And just keep giving you all my love.
The days go by slow and painful.
The thought of me here without you, just don't fit.
Every night I dream of you.
something so sweet in this deep sleep.
For once can't something just go so right.
But the truth is under the skin.
You and me, are two souls who should be one.
Please don't leave me.
You are my sweet and lovely angel in life.
Please don't leave...

Poetry is not just words on paper that may rhyme, but words that are from your heart expressing yourself for others to see from your eyes.

anonymous albert ?

Member Elite

since 2001-03-23

Posts 2979

1 posted 2001-05-20 04:10 AM

good job...and the emotions were sincere...i liked it...keep writing...

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if i die before i wake , i pray the lord my soul will take-"when thugs cry"

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

2 posted 2001-05-20 01:09 PM

I think that you are brave to post such a sincerely written poem here. I usually post stuff with symbolism up to the wazoonie's that it takes a long explanation by me for people to see exactly what I meant...
You wrote this with such truth and honesty...I loved it. I could sense the pain within the poem.
I liked the poem, you did so well on it, and good luck!

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

banburycross
Senior Member

since 2001-03-27

Posts 946
viginia

3 posted 2001-05-20 03:44 PM

this is beautifully heartfelt, i really liked the way you wrote it. i hope everything turns out fot the best, keep posting your work.

Sometimes, the things that go unsaid are the only things worth hearing.

LoneWolf
Member

since 2001-03-10

Posts 384
IL

4 posted 2001-05-20 04:08 PM

Wow i really like this one. i can really relate to this poem. i enjoyed thi one a lot. good job.

It's too bad I'm not as wonderful a person as people say I am, because the world could use a few people like that.

I've learned that even when you

xShUgArHiGhx

Member Elite

since 2000-09-26

Posts 3150
tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs

5 posted 2001-05-21 10:22 PM

This was so beautifully written...excellent job and very heartfelt. I liked it a lot.

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