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Teen Poetry #4

Sweet Best Friend

MoeRocko
Member

since 2001-04-25

Posts 166
West Virginia

0 posted 2001-05-19 03:12 PM

Didn't know you could touch my heart using words
Make me feel the joy of your spirit
Light my way as the sun does the day
I've found too, the hidden jewel that is You

I'm overwhelmed that you would call me friend
Full meadow of four-leaved clovers

When I'm down, you are my Strawberry Field
Angers and stress leave...
You make me see that these aren't even real.
Nothing to get hung about

You Happiness lives inside my heart
shines like a shimmering star
Lights my way on a dreary day
*Locks up our frienship cuz it's here to stay*

This Is Not Here

How do I know where to go when I don't know which way I'm facing

knightlyshadows
Senior Member

since 2001-04-14

Posts 791
obscured vision

1 posted 2001-05-19 03:16 PM

i think im gonna crys. *Sniffs*
strawberry fields....forevers! my song.
awwww ewoksters i loves ya best friend best 'frineds' *hugs* u locked it ups awww *sniffs* this was soooooo sweetish lols
thank you! ur the greatest! *adds to library*
tiff

“A single choice can build destinies,or destroy them.”

I want to look into your eyes and see you smile at me
I want to hear you say "Well done"

Dopey Dope

Moderator

Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

2 posted 2001-05-19 05:17 PM

Very well done....so sweeeeeeeet.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

banburycross
Senior Member

since 2001-03-27

Posts 946
viginia

3 posted 2001-05-20 02:45 PM

this is sweet too, i'm glad that the two of you have each other, best friendship is the best stuff in the world. keep posting your work.

Sometimes, the things that go unsaid are the only things worth hearing.

anonymous albert ?

Member Elite

since 2001-03-23

Posts 2979

4 posted 2001-05-21 01:22 AM

beautiful, sweet and nice...i liked this poem...i really like dhow u wrote this...great job and thanks for the read...

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if i die before i wake , i pray the lord my soul will take-"when thugs cry"

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