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punkrockerrobin

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since 2001-05-15

Posts 1180
Sparks, NV

0 posted 2001-05-18 08:03 PM

i sit here in silence.
no words you will hear.
i am scared for if i speak,
no one will hear me.

i sit here in silence waiting.
i know you don't hear me if i speak.
for if i speak you will not care.
i feel that is how we live.

sitting in silence.
not to speak for if i do,
you will not hear me.
you won't even care.

i'm not bitter.
i just wish you would listen.
for when i do speak,
i have a lot to say.

Robin

I AM WHAT I AM SO DEAL!

lonely*soul
Member

since 2001-04-05

Posts 396
east haddam (moodus) ct :)

1 posted 2001-05-18 08:09 PM

yay! i like this one alot the meanign behind it is great and i can relate soo well, but i think everyones been there atleast once.
*KiMMiE*

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

2 posted 2001-05-18 08:26 PM

.....huh?.......what'd you say?

sorry, couldn't resist!

( this is great)

SEA

Godsend_1
Member

since 2001-04-19

Posts 247
great state of illinois

3 posted 2001-05-18 08:51 PM

awesome robin you have a real talent and i love the poem keep it up and robin so speak cuz i will hear you i promise forever hun love ya bye

ben

obscurity of cloud
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since 2001-05-11

Posts 294
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4 posted 2001-05-19 12:32 PM

Very important point. Excellent work.

"so when at times the mob is swayed to carry praise or blame too far, we may choose something like a star" --Frost

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

5 posted 2001-05-19 03:57 PM

TIP: SEA is the evil mod. hehe

Well done on the poem. I enjoyed it much!

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

punkrockerrobin

Senior Member

since 2001-05-15

Posts 1180
Sparks, NV

6 posted 2001-05-19 04:34 PM

tks yall!
robin

I AM WHAT I AM SO DEAL!

knightlyshadows
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since 2001-04-14

Posts 791
obscured vision

7 posted 2001-05-19 04:59 PM

hey robin, i liked this muchs

lol i have one with the same title and this kind of reminded me of it!! and u dodo ur gankin me Squirt agains!!

grrrrrrs lols
tiff

“A single choice can build destinies,or destroy them.”

I want to look into your eyes and see you smile at me
I want to hear you say "Well done"

MoeRocko
Member

since 2001-04-25

Posts 166
West Virginia

8 posted 2001-05-19 05:01 PM

Wow this one is great. I like your style
Kinda like mine

but better

This Is Not Here

How do I know where to go when I don't know which way I'm facing

banburycross
Senior Member

since 2001-03-27

Posts 946
viginia

9 posted 2001-05-20 02:30 PM

i really like the message that you put in this piece, that and the feeling you put in your writing were very well done here. great job, keep posting your work.

Sometimes, the things that go unsaid are the only things worth hearing.

anonymous albert ?

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since 2001-03-23

Posts 2979

10 posted 2001-05-21 01:15 AM

the message in here was clear to the reader and u should of given this or u did already...anyways...i enjoyed it quite a bit...keep writing...

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