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litle_krazy_poet Member
since 2001-01-17
Posts 71 |
tv bed door computer gutiar drums dresser bored light dad yell stand yell scream hit kick brake cry cry cry cry cry cry leve i'm depressed this is not why somethings need poems and then there are thoes that are just for fun |
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anonymousfemale Member Elite
since 2000-02-02
Posts 2797Limbo |
Krazy every time I come in here now I immediately look for some of your poetry because in simple words and a small time frame, you can express so much. I am really beginning to get attached to your work.  ~AF~ "Do not dwell in the past, do not dream of the future, concentrate the mind on the present moment." Buddha |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
nice one here. Sorry about you being depressed. Seems like everybody likes Acid's style.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I'm in love with my shadow I admire it daily |
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Jenn Cirrincione
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl |
You know, I do like your poetry. So few words, and you can express your emotions well. Sometimes you just need to get your feelings out. xoxo Jenn "A person can never get over a broken heart if they aren't willing to let go of all of the pieces."-- ?? |
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litle_krazy_poet Member
since 2001-01-17
Posts 71 |
AF: thanks for that to tell you the truth i look forword to reading your poems i can really relate to them. well thanks for the comment Dopy: ok about P.O.A this is my insparition i didn't read his stuff untill everyone has been telling me about him Jenn: Thanks for that and i just write poetry and thanks somethings need poems and then there are thoes that are just for fun |
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IsGona Senior Member
since 2000-07-14
Posts 723 |
Wow. I agree. I'm really getting to like your stuff. I think you have a unique ability. But uhhh your little icon thingy... That scares me!!! might want to consider a new one... lol Nice work ~Jason "Every body has their destiny... I'LL CHOOSE MY OWN ~Hatebreed~ |
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sweetstuff101 Member
since 2000-07-27
Posts 375OK, USA |
Being depressed is no fun  ...I would know...a lil too well. Your poem was really great tho. You say so much in so little...I don't know it's just cool. Well great job, keep writing!Luv Always, Priscilla< !signature--> How come it is so easy for a person to say "I hate you," but it is so difficult for someone to say "I love you" and really mean it???? [This message has been edited by sweetstuff101 (edited 01-25-2001).] |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
nobody said growing up is easy life in general is not easy the thing is, you must stay strong keep that head up high  thanks for sharing I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR |
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Fearless_Angel Member
since 2000-10-03
Posts 57Calgary, AB Canada |
Hey there... I know you won't believe me when I say this, but look I know exactly how you feel. Although I don't your situation, I feel your pain. I'm going through a bad depression right now too and have to see a counsilor every week and I alwayz mentally slam the door in his face because I think what the f**k does he know about me. Why does he suddenly care so much? But I do realize that life is a gift, and no matter how down you feel, there will alwayz be some good things to live for even if it sometimes doesn't feel like it. I'd like to try and help you and maybe we can survive this togehter...miah ICQ# is 64399384 so gimme an "uh-oh" aiight? Or my e-mail is [email protected] so drop me a couple of lines...Thankz, best of luck. Lotsa Love, Angel xoxoxo "Take care and remember a certain innocent lil' Angel will alwayz be there for you..." |
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Fearless_Angel Member
since 2000-10-03
Posts 57Calgary, AB Canada |
Hey there... I know you won't believe me when I say this, but look I know exactly how you feel. Although I don't your situation, I feel your pain. I'm going through a bad depression right now too and have to see a counsilor every week and I alwayz mentally slam the door in his face because I think what the f**k does he know about me. Why does he suddenly care so much? But I do realize that life is a gift, and no matter how down you feel, there will alwayz be some good things to live for even if it sometimes doesn't feel like it. If you ever want to talk about it, (maybe we can survive this togehter...)miah ICQ# is 64399384 so gimme an "uh-oh" aiight? Or my e-mail is [email protected] so drop me a couple of lines...Kewl style, keep writing. Thankz, best of luck. Lotsa Love, Angel xoxoxo "Take care and remember a certain innocent lil' Angel will alwayz be there for you..." |
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