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knightlyshadows
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obscured vision

0 posted 2001-05-19 02:10 PM


i freaked
when i thought
that id lost it
i searched
high and low
for forever
i breathed
when i saw
where it was
i smiled
when i realized
id put it there


umm this is about the pen that i use to write all me stuffs....id temporarily lost it...but i found it this mornin...so woo hoo for me!! got to have this pen! its specials lols



“A single choice can build destinies,or destroy them.”

I want to look into your eyes and see you smile at me
I want to hear you say "Well done"

[This message has been edited by knightlyshadows (edited 05-19-2001).]

© Copyright 2001 Tiffany Durham - All Rights Reserved
~sugarpie313~
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1 posted 2001-05-19 05:07 PM


haha this is cute! *L* i do this to everything, i put it someplace and think "oh i'll remember i put it there" but never do.       good job!

Valerie

Why do you do what u do to me baby...you know if I could I'd do anything for you, please don't ignore me cause you know I adore you

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2 posted 2001-05-19 05:38 PM


I really didn't like this much. It seems so not up to your potential tiff. You can do so much better. But I love ya *hugs*

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

vixengrl04
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3 posted 2001-05-19 06:55 PM


Oh this was really cute!!  I'm glad that you found your special pen, but what makes it so special?? LOL.  

~*Nikki*~

~*Of all the millions of people in the world, I'm just me.*~

banburycross
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viginia
4 posted 2001-05-20 02:58 PM


i didn't particularly care for this, i just found it to be lacking any real substance and not anything close to the beautiful poetry you are capable of writing.  not trying to be mean, i just think that ou are amazingly talented and capable of better.  keep posting all your work.

Sometimes, the things that go unsaid are the only things worth hearing.

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5 posted 2001-05-21 01:38 AM


this was cute...but me i be losing pens always...so i go to buy new ones then buy again and i lose it then buy it...then find one of my old pens...then lose that old pen leaving me to find the new one...and it goes on...like that ...i liked the poem tho tiff cya~... ...?

if i die before i wake , i pray the lord my soul will take-"when thugs cry"

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tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs
6 posted 2001-05-26 10:49 AM


Aww this poem was so cute   im glad you found your pen tho  
Poet on Acid
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since 2001-01-07
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7 posted 2001-05-30 04:03 AM


Well damn. I read a poem and smiled. That hasn't happened in a while. For some reason I need to put this in my library.

"It's too cold in the world...too cold to be alone..." - >¶Øʆ<

stace_co2003
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8 posted 2001-05-30 11:38 PM


lol, that's really cute. I likes

STace

I'm just glad that now this rainstorm has ended, and I can see the rainbow once again.

n e where
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9 posted 2001-05-30 11:41 PM


hehe wat a funky lil poem
like it lots

:}

~I'd rather see the world from another angle~ Jewel.

cherish
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10 posted 2001-05-30 11:46 PM


i know exactly how you feel!!..i dont have a pencil case...never had one...and could never use one for more then two days...haha....but what i always did was keep one pen with me for like the whole year...and id be so sad when it ran out....awwwww...and i always lose lids...me and pen lids just dont mix i suppose..hehehe...cute poem...nice to see ppl are writing about sum of the quirkss of life too..hehehe...youve just inspired me to post up a stupid poem of mine..hehe..it is really very stupid...but ill share it..
OH not that im saying this ones stupid...its light hearted ..so im going to put....erm..you get my drift right?...*sighs*..ill put it up after i get sum time out...hehehe...




"Life is not long and boring,
it's short and compelling." -Javier Agosto-

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with you
11 posted 2001-06-02 03:16 AM


Tiffy girl...too cute... I don't have a special pen....but my music.....I can't write without it!!! ok, I really can...I just don't want to   ~SEA
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