Teen Poetry #4 |
My Extra Specials Special Pen!! |
knightlyshadows Senior Member
since 2001-04-14
Posts 791obscured vision |
i freaked when i thought that id lost it i searched high and low for forever i breathed when i saw where it was i smiled when i realized id put it there umm this is about the pen that i use to write all me stuffs....id temporarily lost it...but i found it this mornin...so woo hoo for me!! got to have this pen! its specials lols “A single choice can build destinies,or destroy them.” I want to look into your eyes and see you smile at me I want to hear you say "Well done" [This message has been edited by knightlyshadows (edited 05-19-2001).] |
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~sugarpie313~ Member
since 2000-09-14
Posts 375Maine, USA |
haha this is cute! *L* i do this to everything, i put it someplace and think "oh i'll remember i put it there" but never do. good job! Valerie Why do you do what u do to me baby...you know if I could I'd do anything for you, please don't ignore me cause you know I adore you |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
I really didn't like this much. It seems so not up to your potential tiff. You can do so much better. But I love ya *hugs* I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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vixengrl04 Member
since 2001-04-26
Posts 495East Haddam, CT |
Oh this was really cute!! I'm glad that you found your special pen, but what makes it so special?? LOL. ~*Nikki*~ ~*Of all the millions of people in the world, I'm just me.*~ |
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banburycross Senior Member
since 2001-03-27
Posts 946viginia |
i didn't particularly care for this, i just found it to be lacking any real substance and not anything close to the beautiful poetry you are capable of writing. not trying to be mean, i just think that ou are amazingly talented and capable of better. keep posting all your work. Sometimes, the things that go unsaid are the only things worth hearing. |
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anonymous albert ?
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
this was cute...but me i be losing pens always...so i go to buy new ones then buy again and i lose it then buy it...then find one of my old pens...then lose that old pen leaving me to find the new one...and it goes on...like that ...i liked the poem tho tiff cya~... ...? if i die before i wake , i pray the lord my soul will take-"when thugs cry" |
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xShUgArHiGhx
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
Aww this poem was so cute im glad you found your pen tho |
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Poet on Acid Member
since 2001-01-07
Posts 325Florida, USA |
Well damn. I read a poem and smiled. That hasn't happened in a while. For some reason I need to put this in my library. "It's too cold in the world...too cold to be alone..." - >¶Øʆ< |
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stace_co2003 Member
since 2001-03-30
Posts 497In a dream world |
lol, that's really cute. I likes STace I'm just glad that now this rainstorm has ended, and I can see the rainbow once again. |
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n e where Junior Member
since 2001-05-30
Posts 32Australia |
hehe wat a funky lil poem like it lots :} ~I'd rather see the world from another angle~ Jewel. |
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cherish Senior Member
since 2001-03-25
Posts 1639swimming in fairy floss........... |
i know exactly how you feel!!..i dont have a pencil case...never had one...and could never use one for more then two days...haha....but what i always did was keep one pen with me for like the whole year...and id be so sad when it ran out....awwwww...and i always lose lids...me and pen lids just dont mix i suppose..hehehe...cute poem...nice to see ppl are writing about sum of the quirkss of life too..hehehe...youve just inspired me to post up a stupid poem of mine..hehe..it is really very stupid...but ill share it.. OH not that im saying this ones stupid...its light hearted ..so im going to put....erm..you get my drift right?...*sighs*..ill put it up after i get sum time out...hehehe...
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Tiffy girl...too cute... I don't have a special pen....but my music.....I can't write without it!!! ok, I really can...I just don't want to ~SEA |
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