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Don't Let Go
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Don't Let Go |
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Hidden Junior Member
since 2001-05-17
Posts 18Lost in my own world |
Don't Let Go We'll keep holdin on This I know Never can we Ever let go If only they could see What's really in my heart How it kills me How it hurts when we're apart They can keep you away But not for so long One of these days We'll get our way What are you thinking What goes through your mind Are you keeping your feelings How long can you hide I'll proclaim to the world That I love you so But hidden inside I'll never let go You are my world You got my heart You're in my life Please don't depart. **And when one of us has gone, and one of us is left to carry on, then remembering will have to do, my memories alone will get me through. I'll think about the days of me and you... us against the world.** |
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anonymous albert ?
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
i liked this poem...the feelings were nicely written...even tho it wasnt good ones...as i hope things work out for you and your life  if i die before i wake , i pray the lord my soul will take-"when thugs cry" |
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banburycross Senior Member
since 2001-03-27
Posts 946viginia |
letting go is a hard thing to do, i hope the situation gets better for you. i especially like the last stanza of this, great job. Sometimes, the things that go unsaid are the only things worth hearing. |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
I thought this was great....you did so well on this one. You expressed this wonderfully!  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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