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chasing rain
Senior Member

since 2001-05-15

Posts 737
Canada

0 posted 2001-05-17 11:49 PM

Night comes
And light ceases to exist.
Stars fade in the background.
All around, it is silent,
And the sky becomes a canopy
Of secrecy.
The only light
That guides me
The only light
That binds me
The only light
I can see
Is the darkside
Of the moon.

anonymous albert ?

Member Elite

since 2001-03-23

Posts 2979

1 posted 2001-05-18 03:00 AM

yes you are right and you wrote it well...thanks for the read...i did enjoyed this...keep writing...

...?

if i die before i wake , i pray the lord my soul will take-"when thugs cry"

~*brittt*~
Member

since 2001-05-09

Posts 76
East Haddam, CT

2 posted 2001-05-18 08:48 AM

Very beautiful. I love those descriptive words you used. It helped me imagine.... Well done.
~britt~

xShUgArHiGhx

Member Elite

since 2000-09-26

Posts 3150
tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs

3 posted 2001-05-19 12:18 PM

You used such beautiful words in this...wonderfully done.

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

4 posted 2001-05-19 04:32 PM

VERY well done....I loved this one actually. The ending hit me...Ca-POW!
Hope to see more!

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

Acies

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Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-07

Posts 7665
Twilight Zone

5 posted 2001-05-27 04:01 PM

~*applauds*~
very good write here Leah
Very very impressive
keep it up

I'm so sorry for doubting you Kit ... please forgive me!!!!

stace_co2003
Member

since 2001-03-30

Posts 497
In a dream world

6 posted 2001-05-27 04:08 PM

geez!!!

another good one!! lol, does it end? I don't think so!! and I hope not. keep it up!!

*s*
Stace

Although teenagers claim independence and idealism, we have a common need for guidance, love, a shoulder to occasionally cry on, and at times a close

anonymousfemale
Member Elite

since 2000-02-02

Posts 2797
Limbo

7 posted 2001-05-28 11:11 AM

I love the ending of this piece. It's just so dark that all you can do is smile.

Thanks for an amazing read.

~AF~

Know what you want. Become your real self.
~ David Harold Fink ~

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