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Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

0 posted 2001-01-23 09:34 PM

NOTE: this song isn't good. Doesn't really have a chorus....one of those songs without one....it's a slow song.

3rd Time Around:

You've called for quits two times,
But you don't know
That I'm in love with you
Even though
I cry the years away
For you to love me.
To wonder if I should stay.
Will you take me back?

Walking on past the dawn
I see you there,
But suddenly you vanish,
So I ponder where
You've gone this third time around.
Displeased with desperation.
It's impossible to have found
The meaning of seperation.

So here we are
Lost and confused.
I am not amused,
But still you laugh.

Beating down the doors
With some disposition.
Killing off the whores
With some sense demolition.
I've long to have you
Grasp my old love,
But you never knew
Never knew....

I love you sweet darling.
Star dust magic.
It doesn't matter what you bring.
Avoiding tragic.
Please step aside.
So I start to delve.
Kissing the me in I
As I embrace myself.

So we're all done through.
I still have one wish.
That before I say farewell
I receive a kiss.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

Acies

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Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-07

Posts 7665
Twilight Zone

1 posted 2001-01-24 06:09 PM

very sweet song Dopes
I loved every line of it
it makes you feel some kind of longing
to tell you the truth though, the last line kindda put a little smile on my face

thanks for sharing Dopes
hope to see more
but next time, I'd prefer an MP3

I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR

Lakewalker
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since 2000-08-05

Posts 3289
On the streets w/ people

2 posted 2001-01-24 10:49 PM

It was a slow song, so I read it real slow. I have to say, it was nice having time to stop and take it in, thanks for sharing

"Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Lakewalker
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jeremydraul
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since 2000-08-01

Posts 1118
State of Despair

3 posted 2001-01-24 11:05 PM

hmmm after a few times around, you must have been hurt... and now that its the 3rd time, your heart is probably buried... nice song bro, keep on smiling.

~JDR

"Is it love in my gut, or piss in my bladder?" -Allan Riverwood

anomaly187
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since 2000-06-15

Posts 284
San Francisco,CA,US

4 posted 2001-01-25 12:44 PM

great song and post as usual dope...you write these songs for acoustic guitar right?

"When the going gets weird, the weird turn pro"

Allysa

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since 1999-11-09

Posts 1952
In an upside-down garden

5 posted 2001-01-25 08:10 AM

Oh my god Dopey! This really describes how I kinda sorta feel! Good job on another excellant poem! Long time no see, huh??? I'm back!!!!!!!!!! I missed you!!!!!!!
Allysa

I can't see at all. Even if I could it would all be great, to put your picture on my wall, it reminds me that it's not so bad, it's not so bad.

IsGona
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since 2000-07-14

Posts 723

6 posted 2001-01-25 01:31 PM

I agree with lake. I read it slow and took the time to take in the lyrics and I thought it was great. Nice job
~Jason

"Every body has their destiny...
I'LL CHOOSE MY OWN
~Hatebreed~

Jenn Cirrincione

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since 2000-07-02

Posts 2107
Fl

7 posted 2001-01-25 06:20 PM

Great job Dopey.
This was really good, although sad.

I guess girls can be meanies too. Sorry.

xoxo
Jenn

"A person can never get over a broken heart if they aren't willing to let go of all of the pieces."-- ??

katherine
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since 2000-06-10

Posts 365
Canberra Australia

8 posted 2001-01-25 07:14 PM

so sweet but so sad. great job!

PRiNcEsS4LyFe13
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since 2001-01-24

Posts 5

9 posted 2001-01-25 08:22 PM

That was a great song. It was very sad. It was the first thing that i have read by you and it was amazing. You put alot of thought and feeling into it and i enjoyed it very much. I'm looking forward to read more from you!

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