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litle_krazy_poet Member
since 2001-01-17
Posts 71 |
this poem is about a girl that is in one of my classes and what she does you tease me all you do is tease me you say you want to please me but all you do is tease me you pinch me on the butt you give me these looks and give me these sings you do it all the time i just can't stand it and when i get close you push me away and i love i guess you can stay somethings need poems and then there are thoes that are just for fun |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Yea I know how it is to be teased like that. Good poem in describing this feeling. Sometimes teasing is good, and sometimes bad. But wow......some women tease so good. haha  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I'm in love with my shadow I admire it daily |
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ThyWizard Member
since 2000-08-06
Posts 56Chambersburg, PA, USA |
Not all teasing is bad, there's an enjoyable level of teasing where it's tolerable and cute, but it's not like the teasing in your piece. Good piece though, good show of emotions and flow of words. " How can i feel if i can't breathe..." - Godsmack |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
Thru time, I'd learned to hate these games But still, this is the type that doesn't hurt This piece made my day a bit better thanks I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR |
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Greeneyes617 Member
since 2000-11-22
Posts 329Arkansas |
Whats wrong with being a tease???  Anyways, good poem.... |
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sweetstuff101 Member
since 2000-07-27
Posts 375OK, USA |
doesn't it suck when ppl play wit you like that?? I never understood why people do. *sighs* oh well....ur poem was really great! Good job, keep writing!! Love, ~*~SweetStuff~*~ How come it is so easy for a person to say "I hate you," but it is so difficult for someone to say "I love you" and really mean it???? |
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Jenn Cirrincione
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl |
God!!!! I know guys that have done that kind of stuff to me uck... men are just as terrible!! I've learned that if you make yourself a challenge, and steer clear like you don't want them, they try harder, then THEY are forced to come after YOU. hehehe I LOVE JUSTICE!xoxo Jenn< !signature--> "A person can never get over a broken heart if they aren't willing to let go of all of the pieces."-- ?? [This message has been edited by Jenn Cirrincione (edited 01-24-2001).] |
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IsGona Senior Member
since 2000-07-14
Posts 723 |
I really like this. The way these words are written and placed, your emotion comes across clear. Very well done ~Jason |
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