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Master Senior Member
since 1999-08-18
Posts 1867Boston, MA 
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As the wipers, arching, swiftly sweep white flakes off the windshield, Niagara emerges along the margins and submerges one with wonder and amazement. In silence, one gazes, breathless, where the leafless trees stand iced lifeless. [This message has been edited by Master (edited 05-17-2001).] |
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anonymous albert ?
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
the imagery was nice and the way you have written it fitted really well...thanks for sharing and keep writing...  ...?if i die before i wake , i pray the lord my soul will take-"when thugs cry" |
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anonymousfemale Member Elite
since 2000-02-02
Posts 2797Limbo |
Hmmm wonderful, Master. This one had such a gentle flow to it. It gave the same sort of feeling to just drifting around. Thanks for the read. ~AF~ Stupidity killed the cat. Curiosity was framed. |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
This was breath taking! I really really liked this one.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
~*applauds*~ You are one talented writer I dunno how many times I've said that to you already, but still, it's the truth keep it up Master keep sharing hi Sweets, Lizzy, Ina, Erin, Erica, Minna, Kit, Kamie, Javi, Jenn, Sharon, Nan, Cawlee, Cherish, Val, Sara, Justine, Leah, Jess, Kimmie, Maree, Michel |
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