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orckiller
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since 2001-05-03

Posts 3

0 posted 2001-05-16 04:49 PM

Why do i go
as i sit in my desk
with nothing to do
i look at her and think
does she feel the same
or am i just and outcast in her eyes
I don't know this for sure
but i hope to find out soon
if she doesn't why is there a reason
to go on
then one of my friends
tap me on the shoulder
and i remember why

Marshalzu

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since 2001-02-15

Posts 2681
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1 posted 2001-05-16 04:59 PM

Great poem Orckiller... difficult situation and I hope you realise that no matter how difficult the situation you are in is... there is plenty of reasons for living... and as I have been told a million times "there are plenty more fish in the sea"...
Marshal Zu

anonymous albert ?

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since 2001-03-23

Posts 2979

2 posted 2001-05-17 02:19 AM

this is hard to to be thinking about hope things get better...and the poem itself was great i like dit...and keep writiing...

...?

if i die before i wake , i pray the lord my soul will take-"when thugs cry"

banburycross
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since 2001-03-27

Posts 946
viginia

3 posted 2001-05-18 08:43 AM

i like the positve note that you ended this one on, very good job on this. i hope the situation gets better for you, keep posting your work.

Sometimes, the things that go unsaid are the only things worth hearing.

vixengrl04
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since 2001-04-26

Posts 495
East Haddam, CT

4 posted 2001-05-18 11:27 AM

Awww have some hope!! I hope that things turn out well for you, you wrote this poem nicely.

~*Nikki*~

~*Of all the millions of people in the world, I'm just me.*~

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

5 posted 2001-05-19 02:12 PM

well done! I think you did well on this one!

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

Allysa

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since 1999-11-09

Posts 1952
In an upside-down garden

6 posted 2001-05-25 03:52 PM

well don! okay, well, I can't spell done right the first time, but I'm lazy and crazy, so, well DON!

I know you're in a better place and though I cannot see your face, I know you're smiling down on me, saying everything's okay. ~R Kelly (I wish)

Acies

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Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-07

Posts 7665
Twilight Zone

7 posted 2001-05-29 06:11 PM

Beautiful write. I believe if you added a couple more line, this would have been great. thanks for sharing and keep it up

I'm so sorry for doubting you Kit ... please forgive me!!!!

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

8 posted 2001-05-29 07:00 PM

I understood this....I liked the end..it made me smile

SEA

Isabel Galaxia
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since 2000-06-18

Posts 733

9 posted 2001-05-30 09:43 PM

Wow that's great, love the ending
Bel

stace_co2003
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since 2001-03-30

Posts 497
In a dream world

10 posted 2001-05-30 11:54 PM

*hugs*
I'm a fish in the sea *blinks* if that sounds right at all...
but anyway, I loved this, and I hope to hear more soon.

STace

I'm just glad that now this rainstorm has ended, and I can see the rainbow once again.

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