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baby0508
Member

since 2001-05-16

Posts 58
Moodus, Connecticut

0 posted 2001-05-16 12:13 PM

What the heart says.

I find myself in dreams
of how I wish we were today
It's only in my dreams
That we are this way.

We are no longer one,
and so then we must be two?
But deep within my heart I feel,
that inbetween lies me and you.

I wish that we were closer,
and not so far apart.
You also need to learn how
how to listen to your heart.

If you listen close you'll hear,
what it has to say
and if you listen close enough
it will lead you the right way.

So please listen to your heart
and then maybe you will see
that it's saying to you,
that you should be with me.

~*brittt*~
Member

since 2001-05-09

Posts 76
East Haddam, CT

1 posted 2001-05-16 12:37 PM

This poemis soo sweet and kinda sad.Hopefully whoever it is will come to thier senses. Good job sweetie
~britt~

If you live to be 100 years old, I want to live to be 101 so I never have to live a day without you.

banburycross
Senior Member

since 2001-03-27

Posts 946
viginia

2 posted 2001-05-16 12:51 PM

Welcome to Passions!!

this is a wonderful first post, so sweet

i hope you decide to stay with us for a long time and keep sharing all your work with us. keep posting and replying

Sometimes, the things that go unsaid are the only things worth hearing.

keoni
Senior Member

since 2000-10-16

Posts 850
Up in the mountains in the NFC

3 posted 2001-05-16 01:40 PM

WELCOME! This is a really nice first post. It's a really nice piece. Glad to see you here and I hope to see you here more.
Jon

"Your anger is a gift"-Rage Against The Machine
"Only God can judge me" Tupac Shakur

Marshalzu

Member Elite

since 2001-02-15

Posts 2681
Lurking

4 posted 2001-05-16 02:12 PM

Welcome to passions, great first post I really enjoyed the read. Hope to see more of your work soon.

Marshal Zu

" The tree of liberty must be refreshed from time to time with the blood of patriots" -Thomas jefferson

E-mail/Msn: [email protected]

Suga_Baby
Member

since 2000-08-06

Posts 380
Maine, USA

5 posted 2001-05-16 06:58 PM

WELCOME TO PASSIONS!!

This is great first post and I can really relate to it

Keep posting!

,
Suga

"A dream is a wish your heart makes while you are fast asleep."

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

6 posted 2001-05-16 07:09 PM

Welcome!

Please check your email for a special greeting.....

SEA

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

7 posted 2001-05-16 07:12 PM

Very good job! Welcome to Passions!!!!
I enjoyed this very much. Quite sweet and I hope that you get what you want

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

stace_co2003
Member

since 2001-03-30

Posts 497
In a dream world

8 posted 2001-05-16 08:39 PM

WELCOME TO PASSIONS!!

a *wonderful* first post!! you must keep sharing!!

*s*
Stace

anonymous albert ?

Member Elite

since 2001-03-23

Posts 2979

9 posted 2001-05-17 01:31 AM

welcome welcome welcome...hope you like it here...and this poem was sweet and very nice...i enjoyed it lots...and hope to see more...cya~...

...?

if i die before i wake , i pray the lord my soul will take-"when thugs cry"

anonymousfemale
Member Elite

since 2000-02-02

Posts 2797
Limbo

10 posted 2001-05-17 02:33 AM

Welcome to Passions

What a wonderful first post. You can't always have what you want so think big and you never know what might happen.

~AF~

Stupidity killed the cat. Curiosity was framed.
~ Unknown ~

xShUgArHiGhx

Member Elite

since 2000-09-26

Posts 3150
tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs

11 posted 2001-05-18 11:32 AM

First of all...

WELCOME TO PASSIONS!!!

I really enjoyed thish first post of yours...I really thought this was my fav stanza

"We are no longer one,
and so then we must be two?
But deep within my heart I feel,
that inbetween lies me and you."

It really had a lotta meaning to me. N e way thanks for the read and i cant wait to see more from you in the future!!

Acies

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Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-07

Posts 7665
Twilight Zone

12 posted 2001-05-19 11:59 PM

WELCOME TO PASSIONS!!!

Your first post is most heart felt. You would love it here. I do hope you enjoy sharing your words as much as reading ours

"So long as men can breathe or eyes can see,
So long lives this, and this give life to thee." W.S.

~sugarpie313~
Member

since 2000-09-14

Posts 375
Maine, USA

13 posted 2001-05-20 02:34 PM

this was so good! *L* i loved it! i can relate, but keep your head up and soon enough they will realize what a kick-butt person you are! *L*

great poem!

Valerie

Why do you do what u do to me baby...you know if I could I'd do anything for you, please don't ignore me cause you know I adore you

DancinQueen

Senior Member

since 2000-07-29

Posts 1092
Kokomo,IN,USA

14 posted 2001-05-20 04:51 PM

great one

really hit the spot..keep it up

*dq

**You can't always trust the people you want to**

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