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Strong as Steel
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Strong as Steel |
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Ender Member
since 1999-12-08
Posts 200Yuma, AZ USA 
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Strong, I feel My heart of steel Love, I keep Never to seep Together, with you Happiness shoots through My day, always great Never left at the gate Feelings, yours and mine Is it all a sign? So much, we share Love and care Without you, what to do Could I make it through Complete, you make me feel My heart, my soul, strong as steel ****Poem #1 of a series of 6**** (i made something like a series using this style. Its kind of like the life of a relationship.....the first poem (this one) being in love, and then each poem will describe some other part of the relationship....its hard to explain, but you will see) If I could be anything in the world, I would want to be your tear. I would be born in your eyes, live on your cheek, and die on your lips. -Ender [This message has been edited by Ender (edited 05-16-2001).] |
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DragonFang Senior Member
since 2000-03-09
Posts 522Missouri, USA |
Hey, cool poem, I liked it. Can't wait to read the rest of the series. "Sa souvraya niende missian ye." \ |
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banburycross Senior Member
since 2001-03-27
Posts 946viginia |
thanks for the read, this is really interesting and i thought that flow of this was really neat. i'll be looking forward to reading the rest. Sometimes, the things that go unsaid are the only things worth hearing. |
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Marshalzu  
since 2001-02-15
Posts 2681Lurking |
Ahh part 1... I read part 2 before this one... it's another great poem well done  Marshal Zu " The tree of liberty must be refreshed from time to time with the blood of patriots" -Thomas jefferson |
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anonymous albert ?
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
great poem...i liked the way it was written...thanks for sharing and keep writing...  ...?if i die before i wake , i pray the lord my soul will take-"when thugs cry" |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
I liked the way it sounded. I enjoyed the poem.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
Great write Ender. Can't wait to see the next part of the series. "So long as men can breathe or eyes can see, |
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anonymous albert ?
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
interesting read...i liekd it...thanks for sharing it...very well done!... ...?if i die before i wake , i pray the lord my soul will take-"when thugs cry" [This message has been edited by anonymous albert ? (edited 05-20-2001).] |
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