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xShUgArHiGhx 
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
I wrote this about a so called "friend" and sad but true this is how i feel about her... Walking in the hall, Nose in the air. Not needing to say a word, Not having a care. People fall in shame, With one glance of your eye. Dont say a word, Or your bound to die. Complete reign over all, Queen of the school. Her forsty eyes, Used as a manipulative tool. Duck into your lockers, Keep your tongue in tact. Wonder how it is, Your pride she forces you to lack.. [This message has been edited by xShUgArHiGhx (edited 05-15-2001).] |
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obscurity of cloud Member
since 2001-05-11
Posts 294....:::::******:::::.... |
Your point is well phrased and important. "so when at times the mob is swayed to carry praise or blame too far, we may choose something like a star" --Frost |
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anonymous albert ?
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
well done on the situation you were discribing...i enjoyed this muchs...thanks for the read...and i'm glad to see your poetry again cya~...  ...?if i die before i wake , i pray the lord my soul will take-"when thugs cry" |
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banburycross Senior Member
since 2001-03-27
Posts 946viginia |
you expressed yourself well in this and really got your point across in your writing, great job on this, keep posting your work. Sometimes, the things that go unsaid are the only things worth hearing. |
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xShUgArHiGhx
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
Thanx everyone!  |
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Heavens Tears
since 2001-03-15
Posts 677 |
I know how you feel, but dont let this "friend" get to you. Keep you head up too, and dont let her make you think any less of yourself. *~*Amanda*~* |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Is THIS a friend? If it is then I just don't have any of them! Thank God! Nice poem.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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fearing-laughter Senior Member
since 2001-04-24
Posts 605land of cheese (Wisconsin) |
haha i had a "friend" like this...but then i sort of embarrassed her in front of the whole school....*smiles innocently* great poem by the way, keep writing :-D -fear- |
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TopGunLauren Senior Member
since 2000-08-02
Posts 718California |
I have a lot of friends who act like that but I just think it's stupid.But anyway keep up the awsome work. Lauren |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
Shugar~ This is really great even though its not good. These kind of people in my opinion lack alot of self confidence and they need others to look down on so that they could feel good. People like this arent "friends" like you say. They arent worth your time. But thats just what I think. You did a really great job on this. Keep it up girl!! "If you should die before me, ask if you could bring a friend." |
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xShUgArHiGhx
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
Thank you everyone I appreciate your replies! |
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the_rescue Member
since 2001-05-23
Posts 316Japan |
nice... I know way to many people like this ICE QUEEN's lol |
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