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Allysa

Senior Member

since 1999-11-09

Posts 1952
In an upside-down garden

0 posted 2001-05-15 02:04 PM

You don't want me to cry,
you make me laugh,
and try to help,
but by not telling me
what's in your heart,
you're hurting me.

You don't want me to leave,
you grab my arm,
and make me stay,
but by not saying
what I need to hear,
you're hurting me.

You don't want me to love,
anyone else but you,
and you get mad,
but you don't say anything like
what you need to say and
you're hurting me.

You plus me would work,
you know it in your heart,
and you wish for it to happen,
but you don't do anything to help,
what you want to happen,
and though you don't mean to,
you're hurting me.

I know you're in a better place and though I cannot see your face, I know you're smiling down on me, saying everything's okay. ~R Kelly (I wish)

keoni
Senior Member

since 2000-10-16

Posts 850
Up in the mountains in the NFC

1 posted 2001-05-15 02:28 PM

Very nice Allysa. I hope every thing goes better, I know this one all too well and it sucks. Good luck.
Jon

"Your anger is a gift"-Rage Against The Machine
"Only God can judge me" Tupac Shakur

Allysa

Senior Member

since 1999-11-09

Posts 1952
In an upside-down garden

2 posted 2001-05-15 03:24 PM

thanks jon. I can't think of much to say, but thanks. It does suck.

I know you're in a better place and though I cannot see your face, I know you're smiling down on me, saying everything's okay. ~R Kelly (I wish)

banburycross
Senior Member

since 2001-03-27

Posts 946
viginia

3 posted 2001-05-15 04:13 PM

this is a hard situation to be in, you know you have me to talk to if you need to

i must say though that tough situations often create wonderful poetry, which is certainly the case here. keep posting all your work.

Sometimes, the things that go unsaid are the only things worth hearing.

anonymous albert ?

Member Elite

since 2001-03-23

Posts 2979

4 posted 2001-05-15 05:05 PM

i liked the poem...and hope everything works out for you and your situation...keep writing

if i die before i wake , i pray the lord my soul will take-"when thugs cry"

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

5 posted 2001-05-16 06:48 PM

I liked the poem but hope things get better for you Allysa *hugs*

CwboyAtHeart
Senior Member

since 2001-04-14

Posts 541
Selah, WA, USA

6 posted 2001-05-16 08:44 PM

Wow. Very good poem. I could relate to it all too well. Well expressed, and it's going to my library. Keep writing!

- Cody -

Living From Memories
Living From Thoughts
There Are Some Things In Live
That Cannot Be Taught

lonely*soul
Member

since 2001-04-05

Posts 396
east haddam (moodus) ct :)

7 posted 2001-05-16 09:38 PM

i like this one!! and i too, know the feeling..i think everyone does

anyways...good job
*KiMMiE*

DancinQueen

Senior Member

since 2000-07-29

Posts 1092
Kokomo,IN,USA

8 posted 2001-05-16 10:51 PM

dang grl~ we must be going through the same exact situation..this poem and the last one of yours i read fit my situation to a T right now. sucks huh? if you ever wanna talk or just whine about it to me, feel free to email me or somethin

*dq

**You can't always trust the people you want to**

Acies

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Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-07

Posts 7665
Twilight Zone

9 posted 2001-05-18 12:06 PM

Allysa, don't commit too much right now cause you're moving. It might hurt more later. Hope things do work out. ~*hugs*~

"So long as men can breathe or eyes can see,
So long lives this, and this give life to thee." W.S.

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