Teen Poetry #4 |
Escape |
soulfulpoet Junior Member
since 2000-04-14
Posts 42ontario, canada |
I've lost myself in the pain I'm a fallen angel a lost soul tainted and disturbed. I've been numbing my thoughts, But the pain just gets worse. Please save me, help me out. I need to get out of here. All I feel is anger, frustration. Save me from myself. Don't leave me here alone. Please We all feel hurt, but why am i hurting myself? I'm killing myself, and I can't stop. I can't run or hide anymore. I'kll let the pain devour me now I'm sorry I'm sorry goodbye |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
If you need someone to talk to, I'm here. Just email me ok? You aren't alone and yes, I really do care Hugs to you SEA |
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soulfulpoet Junior Member
since 2000-04-14
Posts 42ontario, canada |
thanks, its good to know that i have someone i can talk to it means a lot |
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anonymous albert ?
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
i felt this poem..and it is sad but so many people go through it unoticed as i do...i enjoyed the read and related to it alot as hope you keep your head up and stay strong...hope to see more... ...? if i die before i wake , i pray the lord my soul will take-"when thugs cry" |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
The offer is very real....I'm here if you need it. Feel free ok? SEA |
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banburycross Senior Member
since 2001-03-27
Posts 946viginia |
this is really powerful writing, you truly are a soulful poet. and when you are here with everyone at passions, you can never be all alone drop me a line if you need to talk. Sometimes, the things that go unsaid are the only things worth hearing. |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
I enjoyed the poem, but I hope all goes ok with you here on out. Good luck I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
You've shown so much pain. I too am here if you need someone to talk to. You can see my icq number from above, just add me ~*hugs*~ "So long as men can breathe or eyes can see, |
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vixengrl04 Member
since 2001-04-26
Posts 495East Haddam, CT |
This was really, really sad...Kind of sounded like some sort of cry for help...I'm sure anyone on here would listen to you if you just need someone to talk to, myself included..I know what it feels like to hurt, trust me, and you can E-mail anytime [email protected] Good luck. ~*Nikki*~ ~*Of all the millions of people in the world, I'm just me.*~ |
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soulfulpoet Junior Member
since 2000-04-14
Posts 42ontario, canada |
thanks all of you for wupporting me writing is one of the only ways i can show how i feel, cause i dont feel comfortable talking to people about my feelings. thanks a lot |
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xShUgArHiGhx
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
This was beautifully written ::hugs:: hun |
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lonely*soul Member
since 2001-04-05
Posts 396east haddam (moodus) ct :) |
:::lotsa hugs::: it was a good poem..but if ya ever need to talk i-m me on aim at cutiekimmie86 k? *KiMMiE* |
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