Teen Poetry #4 |
Running Away In A Chevy |
Tamma
since 2000-01-17
Posts 794In His Arms, Harpers Ferry, WV |
A tear streamed down her cheek, As she took one last look around, And threw her bag in her truck She knew it was tyme to leave. She let out a cry when she turned the key And her old Chevy started to roar Somehow the sound comforted her As it always has in the past No one knew she was leaving She was running away from pain She stopped by her boyfriend’s house To leave a note, to say her goodbye. She didn’t want to leave him behind But she felt she had no choice She had to get away from them Before it went too far She knew she’d miss him But she knew she had to leave “I love you,” she said aloud Wishing he could hear her She wanted to see him She drove past the school Hoping he’d be at his car She sighed when he wasn’t She wanted to see him So she snuck into school And waited by his class To tell him she loved him She gave him a hug And told him she was leaving She hugged him again And a tear slid down her cheek She took his hand And lead him to her truck Unlocked the door And told him to get in She drove around Telling him everything Looking in his eyes Her heart caved She saw a tear in his eye And took his hand “I love you,” she said Trying to hold back tears She slowed the truck Pulled over to the side And hugged the one person That ever understood her “Come with me” she begged “We can run away together” She held onto his hand And looked into his Hazel eyes For a moment, his eyes lit up But then quickly dimmed He sighed and said “I’m sorry, but I can’t” Then her eyes dulled And filled with tears As they both held each other Soaked by their tears She started her Chevy again The roar seemed louder She never let go of his hand And drove him back to school They both got out of the truck And embraced each other again She just couldn’t leave him behind “I’ll stay, for you,” she sighed. Those girls on TV don't know that being 36-24-36 doesn't mean a thing unless you got the face to back it up [This message has been edited by Tamma (edited 05-14-2001).] |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
ripping my heart out here.....wow *wiping tears off with sleeve* this is really touching SEA |
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anonymous albert ?
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
emotional and yet touching...i loved the way you told the story of this girls life situation...great poem!...i enjoyed every verse...thanks for the read tamma... ...? if i die before i wake , i pray the lord my soul will take-"when thugs cry" |
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AngelPoet87 Member
since 2001-04-21
Posts 280Indy |
Oh wow, that one really really really hit home for me. It reminds me of a certain someone I love and adore, he knows who he is so I won't mention any names *cough*Angel*cough*. This was really good, I praise you. |
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banburycross Senior Member
since 2001-03-27
Posts 946viginia |
this is some truly amazing writine. it had the feel of one of those sad country songs that makes me cry you did a really excellent job on this piece, keep posting your work. Sometimes, the things that go unsaid are the only things worth hearing. |
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obscurity of cloud Member
since 2001-05-11
Posts 294....:::::******:::::.... |
This is so touching! I'm sitting here sniffling. Great expression of emotion. Not to mention some great Chevy memories; my older brother (now at college) has always had an affinity for antique Chevys. "so when at times the mob is swayed to carry praise or blame too far, we may choose something like a star" --Frost |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Well done Tamma! You've touched the masses! I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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Godsend_1 Member
since 2001-04-19
Posts 247great state of illinois |
wow that was amazing tamma i loved it it acctually made me cry keep up the love hun and i really know how this feels love ya leter ben i am what i am and that is all that i am and all that i shall ever be......so deal with it |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
A little too long Tamma, but still a vry emotional piece. You're really getting better "So long as men can breathe or eyes can see, |
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MindlessPoet Member
since 2001-04-20
Posts 106Texas |
oh that was very touching I can see now why I was advised to read some of your work, hehe. *TiMMYBoY* |
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Allysa
since 1999-11-09
Posts 1952In an upside-down garden |
Tamma, that was so touching and so incredibly awesome!!!!!!! Oh my lord! You got me on the verge of tears and my eyeliner's gonna run. Good job! I know you're in a better place and though I cannot see your face, I know you're smiling down on me, saying everything's okay. ~R Kelly (I wish) |
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Jenn Cirrincione
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl |
I'll agree that it was long...but you know it was quite heartfelt, and you put enormous effort into writing it, I can tell. If it is true to life, you know, sometimes the one we love can save us from huge mistakes. And if it's not...then you have a great imagination and creative flair. Kudos!! Jenn "If it's wrong to love you, then my heart just won't let me be right, cause I'm drowned in you, and I won't pull through without you by my side." Mari |
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