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Cherub
New Member

since 2001-01-21

Posts 1

0 posted 2001-01-23 06:45 AM

A FRIEND Kate Thornewell
Someone who is there,
Who will always care,
Always listen...
Who's eyes will glisten,
With sympathetic tears,
As we tell them our fears...
Who's lips are sealed,
When our secrets are revealed,
Who never will leave,
But to our side will cleave...
On whom we can rely,
Til the day we die...
Who'll be there to the end,
That, I believe, is a friend!

anonymousfemale
Member Elite

since 2000-02-02

Posts 2797
Limbo

1 posted 2001-01-23 07:44 AM

Such a sweet poem.

This is what a friend is, however people like this can sometimes be hard to find. I hope you have found someone who fulfills this image.

I'm looking forward to reading more of your work.

~AF~

"Do not dwell in the past, do not dream of the future, concentrate the mind on the present moment."
Buddha

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

2 posted 2001-01-23 04:16 PM

Well yes, that is a friend. Nice one here. I surely hope that you have many of these friends. Keep posting and I hope to see more from you.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

Acies

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Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-07

Posts 7665
Twilight Zone

3 posted 2001-01-24 10:18 AM

very good description of a friend
can i add a thought though?
friends don't have to be there 24/7, as long as they are there in times we need them the most

great writing
keep posting

I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR

Jenn Cirrincione

Member Elite

since 2000-07-02

Posts 2107
Fl

4 posted 2001-01-24 05:39 PM

Good poem. These people ARE quite rare.
Friends should also relate to how you feel, and not abandon you in your time of need. Uck....sometimes people just suck.
xoxo
Jenn

"A person can never get over a broken heart if they aren't willing to let go of all of the pieces."-- ??

katherine
Member

since 2000-06-10

Posts 365
Canberra Australia

5 posted 2001-01-24 08:43 PM

it's a good poem! really sweet!

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