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XFalloutX
Junior Member

since 2001-05-13

Posts 31
NC

0 posted 2001-05-14 03:34 PM

I took that path less traveled,
and I ended up in an unforgiving place
Where no one understood the feelings and needs I have.
The feeling of loneliness and the need for love
But I'm alone in this place and no one cares
and all I ask is to be loved and to love
But no I'm alone and no one cares

silvrduck
Member

since 2000-11-05

Posts 146

1 posted 2001-05-14 03:38 PM

*hugs* I can relate..

this was a good poem though, you expressed yourself very well. Keep posting!

*love is blind; friendship closes its eyes.*

anonymous albert ?

Member Elite

since 2001-03-23

Posts 2979

2 posted 2001-05-14 03:41 PM

this is how i feel a lot of times in my life...is was such a real poem...that went straight to my heart...i loved this short... but true poem...thanks for sharing it...

...?

if i die before i wake , i pray the lord my soul will take-"when thugs cry"

AngelPoet87
Member

since 2001-04-21

Posts 280
Indy

3 posted 2001-05-14 05:57 PM

Great how you started off using a poem we've all came across in our lives, that makes it really powerful and catches the readers attention, good job, this was good.

soulfulpoet
Junior Member

since 2000-04-14

Posts 42
ontario, canada

4 posted 2001-05-14 07:06 PM

this was such a good poem, i feel exactly the way your feeling, and i know what its like to have no one around you that understands. please keep writing poems..

banburycross
Senior Member

since 2001-03-27

Posts 946
viginia

5 posted 2001-05-14 07:59 PM

i know how you feel, that place is no fun and i seem to end up there all too often. i hope things get better for you, keep posting your work.

Sometimes, the things that go unsaid are the only things worth hearing.

XFalloutX
Junior Member

since 2001-05-13

Posts 31
NC

6 posted 2001-05-14 09:41 PM

It makes me feel better knowing that Im not alone

"should I smile because we are friends or cry because thats all will ever be?"

xShUgArHiGhx

Member Elite

since 2000-09-26

Posts 3150
tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs

7 posted 2001-05-15 08:47 PM

::Hugs::

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

8 posted 2001-05-16 07:25 PM

The first line signalled off a little Robert Frost there.......I liked the spin off....like you read his poem and you said..."oh yea, well that road you took sucked Robert....take this!" and you wrote that poem. Well....ok no....but hey I liked it. Thought you did well.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

lonely*soul
Member

since 2001-04-05

Posts 396
east haddam (moodus) ct :)

9 posted 2001-05-16 07:28 PM

so robert frost was wrong? lol it did sound like robert frost in the beginning. but your right...when u take that road less traveled ya dont really know whats in store for ya...a good or bad turn out my happen..you got the bad end of it..srry bout that! good job tho!
*KiMMiE*

Acies

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Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-07

Posts 7665
Twilight Zone

10 posted 2001-05-18 11:35 AM

~*hugs*~
you have pip
everyone in here cares

"So long as men can breathe or eyes can see,
So long lives this, and this give life to thee." W.S.

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