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My Peachy Life
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My Peachy Life |
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Allysa 
since 1999-11-09
Posts 1952In an upside-down garden 
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You'd never guess that being fourteen, could be such a complicated thing. And that one week after my birthday, sadness would come. But one week after my birthday, another person was to turn fourteen, yet sadly her life was cut short, and now she'll never be. My peaches and cream life, some may think it's quite simple. Others know the truth inside, we all just want a vacation! There's someone come back into my life, as of yesterday, a friend from seven years gone back, and now he's here again. He's sixteen now, he never seemed that old before, he's the best friend of one of my ex's, the one Justin would hate. So now there are two Justin's, the thirteen year old one, and the sixteen year old one, and my life's more complicated. I'll stick with the younger one, I think, he's more peaches and cream. That's my life. Peaches and Cream. this is just a quick, not thought out rant. I know you're in a better place and though I cannot see your face, I know you're smiling down on me, saying everything's okay. ~R Kelly (I wish) |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
It was a heartfelt rant  |
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Martinque Member
since 2000-05-17
Posts 69 |
From the heart for sure. |
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banburycross Senior Member
since 2001-03-27
Posts 946viginia |
wow, i think i understand your email a little better now you express yourself so beautifully in your writing, and i know how you feel. i hope things get better, talk to you soon.Sometimes, the things that go unsaid are the only things worth hearing. |
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Child of the Stars
since 2000-09-07
Posts 1658Ann Arbor, MI |
Whoa very good comparison...yeah fourteen ain't too nice to me eitha. Keep yo head up.~Carly "I'll take in anyone who's taking off their camouflage..." ~Third Eye Blind~Camouflage |
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anonymous albert ?
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
...i think you did quite well...great job and keep writing...  ...? if i die before i wake , i pray the lord my soul will take-"when thugs cry" |
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CwboyAtHeart Senior Member
since 2001-04-14
Posts 541Selah, WA, USA |
It's good to get that stuff out, isn't it? I can actually relate a little bit to some of that... And I agree, it sucks to be fourteen. - Cody - |
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vixengrl04 Member
since 2001-04-26
Posts 495East Haddam, CT |
Wow u think 14 sucks, wait till you turn 15! I think the teen years in general suck a lot..But you wrote this well and I truly hope things get better for you. ~*Nikki*~ ~*Of all the millions of people in the world, I'm just me.*~ |
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Allysa
since 1999-11-09
Posts 1952In an upside-down garden |
thanks everyone. How many people here are fourteen? I know you're in a better place and though I cannot see your face, I know you're smiling down on me, saying everything's okay. ~R Kelly (I wish) |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
Hey Allysa --- you should start looking at the positive sides of life. Wasup with you? "So long as men can breathe or eyes can see, |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
I was 14 four years ago....does that count? Anyway, nice rant...*hugs*  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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Heavens Tears
since 2001-03-15
Posts 677 |
It was a well written on the spot rant. It seems like you have an idea of what you are going to do. Just dont let anything get in your way. *~*Amanda*~* |
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