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CwboyAtHeart Senior Member
since 2001-04-14
Posts 541Selah, WA, USA 
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I just wrote this one tonight, about 10 minutes ago. I guess I'm finally starting to realize that life isn't as bad as I often try to think that it is... From now on, hopefully I can stay optimistic about life and not get into my own trap. WHY? Why am I always sad? Oh how I wish I knew My life is always great But in my head that's not true Why am I always blue? I wish I could tell you why Some days I want to stay in bed Some days I just want to cry Why is everybody so happy? I wish my life was as good as theirs I hide my hurt inside of me So noone stops and noone cares Why is everyone so fake? I wish I could say I had a best friend So many say that they love me But nobody gives a dang in the end Why is it that I can't see? I wish I knew my life was great I guess I'm just too dumb to tell I can't seem to get that straight Why is it that life is perfect? I wish I saw all this love So many people care about me Life's awesome when I rise above I guess I just can get depressed And don't realize how great life is I'm so glad I finally see Mine's as good as hers or his *By the way, this has nothing to do with anything... But how old are you all here? I just feel like you all are like way older than me, and I'm just interested to find out if you really are...* - Cody - Living From Memories Living From Thoughts There Are Some Things In Live That Cannot Be Taught [This message has been edited by CwboyAtHeart (edited 05-14-2001).] |
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anonymous albert ?
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
i really liked this poem...great job..i thought this is how i feel most of the time and the end was good it was postive which we shgould all look at life...and i'm 17..keepw riting...  ...?if i die before i wake , i pray the lord my soul will take-"when thugs cry" |
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banburycross Senior Member
since 2001-03-27
Posts 946viginia |
i'm glad you've been looking up lately, i hope you can stay optomistic about everything. great writing, i like this piece a lot. oh yeah, and i'm 17  Sometimes, the things that go unsaid are the only things worth hearing. |
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Marshalzu 
since 2001-02-15
Posts 2681Lurking |
I'm glad to see that you are looking forward in life... great job on the poem and i'm 18... Mr mr Zu.  " The tree of liberty must be refreshed from time to time with the blood of patriots" -Thomas jefferson |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
I liked the poem....looks like things are running good for you. I'm 18  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
It's nice to see that you've learned to look at the good things in life and ot complain about what you don't have. Beautiful write. keep it up "So long as men can breathe or eyes can see, |
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