Teen Poetry #4 |
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Spice Senior Member
since 2001-04-13
Posts 1266Resting in my cardboard box. |
To be honest- I don't write poetry unless I have to for a Language class or something. But I got bored one day and tried writing down thoughts in my head. I'm far from Emily Dickinson...infact- as I said in The Ally- all poetry of mine is very elementry. I know nothing about the rules and so on...I just do it for fun. Hopefully that'll explain it. HaHa. =) Relishing on all that is you Eternity together. Living our lives as a unit of one Appreciating eachother. Teaching eachother new things daily Inlove Forever. Over looking negativity and bad habits Never giving up. Sharing deep secrets of wishes and dreams Holding one-another. Initiating kisses when one is sad or upset Promised partnership. |
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anonymous albert ?
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
good job...you shouldnt give up and say you cant write but insteda write it not only on specail occasion..hope to see more tho...thanks for the reda... ...? if i die before i wake , i pray the lord my soul will take-"when thugs cry" |
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Marshalzu
since 2001-02-15
Posts 2681Lurking |
I thought this was really good and I hope to see more of you in teen #4 in the future. Mr mr Zu " The tree of liberty must be refreshed from time to time with the blood of patriots" -Thomas jefferson |
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vixengrl04 Member
since 2001-04-26
Posts 495East Haddam, CT |
Oh this was really good, didn't sound very elementary to me! Hope to see more from you. ~*Nikki*~ ~*Of all the millions of people in the world, I'm just me.*~ |
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Spice Senior Member
since 2001-04-13
Posts 1266Resting in my cardboard box. |
Wow. People actually read my "poetry" and liked it? Or were you guys just being nice cause I'm a newbie? ...then again- does it matter? Thanks for taking the time to read it, and for taking even more time to comment on it. I appreciate it alot. |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
They were being nice Well I see you started to post up poetry....Oooooooo...Mwahahahahaha Well I enjoyed this. You write well. I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
I don't belive this to be elementary writing. You have more talent in you than you think. Keep it up. "So long as men can breathe or eyes can see, |
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