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xShUgArHiGhx

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since 2000-09-26

Posts 3150
tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs

0 posted 2001-05-13 10:13 PM

Im tired of being helped,
Why cant i be on my own?
People are too worried about me,
Their afraid to leave me alone...
Well stop worrying,
Your driving me all insane.
Your making me hate all of you,
Your the only ones to blame.
You see this unhappiness??
When the tears fall from my eyes??
You wonder why there's so much hurt and pain,
When you look inside.
Well maybe its because of things,
That you over look in my life.
The things like how life sux and then you die,
And nothing for me ever goes right.
The guy i love
is in love with another,
My happiness doesnt last,
From one day to the other.
I'm so exhausted,
With my expectations day to day.
I wish my life
would be taken away.
This may sound harsh,
And a sinful wish to think.
Hey well ya never know,
Thats probably why i'm seeing a shrink.
I'm mocking myself,
With every word put to paper.
I dont care right now though,
I'll worry about myself later.
So i guess this goes out,
To all the people who pretend to care.
Who are in my life,
Only cause you were put there.
Stop trying to help me,
I dont care what you say.
Just leave me alone,
Let me go on my own way.

AngelPoet87
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since 2001-04-21

Posts 280
Indy

1 posted 2001-05-13 10:22 PM

wow i think alot of people can relate to this (*looks in the mirror*), i like it alot, really well said.

silvrduck
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since 2000-11-05

Posts 146

2 posted 2001-05-13 11:24 PM

Wow... I hope things get better for you girl. I know I can relate... *hugs*
this was a wonderfully expressed poem.. take care, ok?
Sarah

*love is blind; friendship closes its eyes.*

anonymous albert ?

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since 2001-03-23

Posts 2979

3 posted 2001-05-14 12:40 PM

hmmm....this is such a real piece..i liked the emotions you showed in here...thansk for a read i related to..thansk for the read...

...?

if i die before i wake , i pray the lord my soul will take-"when thugs cry"

banburycross
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since 2001-03-27

Posts 946
viginia

4 posted 2001-05-14 10:28 AM

you express yourself beautifully, the emotion threaded through all your words is really incredible. if you want someone to talk to you can always write me, i promise i won't be pretending to care

i hope things get better for you, keep posting your poetry.

Sometimes, the things that go unsaid are the only things worth hearing.

vixengrl04
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since 2001-04-26

Posts 495
East Haddam, CT

5 posted 2001-05-14 11:18 AM

Hey this is really well-written. I can most definitely relate to this one, and I know alot of people in my life that, if they just left me alone, things would be so much easier. But I think these ppl only mean the best. Good work.

~*Nikki*~

~*Of all the millions of people in the world, I'm just me.*~

xShUgArHiGhx

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since 2000-09-26

Posts 3150
tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs

6 posted 2001-05-15 07:14 PM

Thank you everyone!!

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

7 posted 2001-05-18 02:50 PM

I liked this one. Not as good as some of your others I have read, that being a lot, but you know what I mean.
Anyway nicely done.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

~sugarpie313~
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since 2000-09-14

Posts 375
Maine, USA

8 posted 2001-05-18 03:20 PM

have you been inside my head?? *L* you perfectly described what i think in your poem. and i love this so much! it's heading straight to my library!!

Why do you do what u do to me baby...you know if I could I'd do anything for you, please don't ignore me cause you know I adore you

DancinQueen

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since 2000-07-29

Posts 1092
Kokomo,IN,USA

9 posted 2001-05-18 04:56 PM

wow~great one here..we need to chat so IM me if you see me on ok???

**You can't always trust the people you want to**

Acies

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Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-07

Posts 7665
Twilight Zone

10 posted 2001-06-06 07:30 PM

This is really very realistic.
Obviously it is, cause it's your feelings
I'm amazed by the amount of emotions you show on this piece
very well done Michi(is that right?)
keep sharing

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