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I Cried, I'm Sorry
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I Cried, I'm Sorry |
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Tamma
since 2000-01-17
Posts 794In His Arms, Harpers Ferry, WV 
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I’m sorry I cried I really didn’t mean to I didn’t want you to see All the pain I hold inside I’ve held inside a long while You weren’t supposed to see You weren’t supposed to know I cried, I’m sorry You’re the only one That I have left No one else loves me They all hate me now What did I do wrong? I’m sorry I cried Even the ones I called “friend” Have left me behind I am nothing – Not worth caring about I cried, I’m sorry. Those girls on TV don't know that being |
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Chel Senior Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 511Baltimore, MD, USA |
Emotional piece, kind of sounds like something I would write, but you did a better job. Keep your head up, and the great work. Chel "True friends stab you in the front." |
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stace_co2003 Member
since 2001-03-30
Posts 497In a dream world |
oh...no...you are, you are, you are, you ARE worth caring about!!!! *hugs* I hope everything goes back to normal...and if they weren't there when you needed them, they aren't really friends. hold your head up high, and keep right on smiling....it makes people wonder what you are thinking!!  *s* Stace |
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banburycross Senior Member
since 2001-03-27
Posts 946viginia |
this is a really well written poem. you conveyed the feeling perfectly to the reader and put a lot of yourself into this. great job, keep writing. Sometimes, the things that go unsaid are the only things worth hearing. |
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anonymous albert ?
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
great job on putting your emotions in this poem..i felted it i liekd it and hope things are better... ......if i die before i wake , i pray the lord my soul will take-"when thugs cry" |
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Allysa 
since 1999-11-09
Posts 1952In an upside-down garden |
Tamma, what's going on??? Something is. I can tell. You should never say you're sorry for crying. It's how you feel at that moment that causes those tears and if they come, then there's a pretty *DARN* good reason for that. Don't ever let anyone make you feel sorry for anything you do, unless it's truly bad. That's just the way you feel at that given time. anyways, great poem. I know you're in a better place and though I cannot see your face, I know you're smiling down on me, saying everything's okay. ~R Kelly (I wish) |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Well if this is about your love life then I could see why. It seems to be quite complex...I wish the best for you.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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anonymousfemale Member Elite
since 2000-02-02
Posts 2797Limbo |
Tamma, this doesn't sound a good situation at all. Try to pull through it. Most people are so completely and utterly moronic when it comes to things like this that they don't see when they are hurting a friend. Keep your head up and if worse comes to worse, hit them with a wooden spoon.  ~AF~ Stupidity killed the cat. Curiosity was framed. |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
~*hugs Tamma*~ don't make your love life so complicated  "So long as men can breathe or eyes can see, |
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