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LoneWolf
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0 posted 2001-05-13 07:48 PM


“Missing you”

Never before
has a thing like this happened
with your absence
I am left
Missing you

Not even all that powers of heaven
Nor all the hosts of hell
Could stop me in this endless search
For you my love

Fighting all the demons
Within my mind
Tormenting my daily
Saying that you I shall never find


Putting forth
Every last ounce of strength
Thinking only of my love
I continue my never ending search

Not knowing exactly why
Pushing forward through the lies
To find the truth within my heart
That I am left
Missing you


It's too bad I'm not as wonderful a person as people say I am, because the world could use a few people like that.

I've learned that even when you

[This message has been edited by LoneWolf (edited 05-13-2001).]

© Copyright 2001 Colin Heffernan - All Rights Reserved
banburycross
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since 2001-03-27
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viginia
1 posted 2001-05-13 07:56 PM


wow, the last stanza of this piece is really beautiful, i love the way you ended this poem.  wonderful writing, keep posting your work.

Sometimes, the things that go unsaid are the only things worth hearing.

stace_co2003
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since 2001-03-30
Posts 497
In a dream world
2 posted 2001-05-13 07:57 PM


I know the feeling!!! I've been there, and I know it's not easy. I wish you much luck in your search.

*hugs*
Stace

anonymous albert ?
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3 posted 2001-05-14 12:29 PM


beautiful,powerful,and great discriptin of feelings..i loved this piece...thansk for an awesome read... ...?

if i die before i wake , i pray the lord my soul will take-"when thugs cry"

Dopey Dope
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4 posted 2001-05-18 02:46 PM


Very touching poem. I really liked the way you finished it off.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

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