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Missing you |
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LoneWolf Member
since 2001-03-10
Posts 384IL 
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“Missing you” Never before has a thing like this happened with your absence I am left Missing you Not even all that powers of heaven Nor all the hosts of hell Could stop me in this endless search For you my love Fighting all the demons Within my mind Tormenting my daily Saying that you I shall never find Putting forth Every last ounce of strength Thinking only of my love I continue my never ending search Not knowing exactly why Pushing forward through the lies To find the truth within my heart That I am left Missing you It's too bad I'm not as wonderful a person as people say I am, because the world could use a few people like that. I've learned that even when you [This message has been edited by LoneWolf (edited 05-13-2001).] |
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banburycross Senior Member
since 2001-03-27
Posts 946viginia |
wow, the last stanza of this piece is really beautiful, i love the way you ended this poem. wonderful writing, keep posting your work. Sometimes, the things that go unsaid are the only things worth hearing. |
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stace_co2003 Member
since 2001-03-30
Posts 497In a dream world |
I know the feeling!!! I've been there, and I know it's not easy. I wish you much luck in your search. *hugs* Stace |
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anonymous albert ?
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
beautiful,powerful,and great discriptin of feelings..i loved this piece...thansk for an awesome read...  ...?if i die before i wake , i pray the lord my soul will take-"when thugs cry" |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Very touching poem. I really liked the way you finished it off.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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