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dramaqueen22086
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since 2001-05-05

Posts 50
Hadlyme, CT

0 posted 2001-05-13 02:45 PM

hey ppl. i wrote this for my mommy, it's mother's day. happy mommy day. ~!kellie!~

Because of you I’m thoughtful,
Understanding and kind
Because of you I’m caring,
And never late for time
Because your smile makes me happy,
When I’m feeling down
Because your smile gives me joy,
I never have a frown
Because of me I make you mad,
When I’m having a bad day
Because of you,
My problems just seem to fade away
Because of you I try to say I love you,
In words more than one
Because of you I’m thankful,
For all that you have done

lonely*soul
Member

since 2001-04-05

Posts 396
east haddam (moodus) ct :)

1 posted 2001-05-13 02:58 PM

awww kellie your mommy will luv it...tell her i said happy moms day k?
*KiMMiE*

LoveBug

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Member Elite

since 2000-01-08

Posts 4697

2 posted 2001-05-13 05:06 PM

This is a beautiful Mother's day tribute! The emotions you give us are beautifully expressed.. the only thing is that your metimic scheme needs a little work. You would be surprised how much it can improve a work. The emotions are all there, though, and thats all that matters. Thanks for sharing.

"Men judge generally more by the eye than by the hand, for everyone can see and few can feel."-Machiavelli

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

3 posted 2001-05-17 02:56 PM

Wonderful tribute to your mother. If I was a mother I'd want this tribute. SO sweet, and so well done.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

Rach813
Junior Member

since 2001-04-17

Posts 30
Maine

4 posted 2001-05-17 04:15 PM

This is a really good poem about your mom...I bet she loved it!

Allan Riverwood

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since 2001-01-04

Posts 3502
Winnipeg

5 posted 2001-05-17 11:17 PM

Great work on a mothers' day poem! I'm sure she loved it, you did a great job of expressing your appreciation for your mother.
Very nice poem!
~Allan

Build a man a fire, and he's warm for a day. Set a man on fire, and he'll be warm for the rest of his life.
~Unknown

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