They've got it easy........

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Teen Poetry #4

They've got it easy........

Terryloveiris_85
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since 2001-04-23

Posts 61
The middle of nowhere

0 posted 2001-05-11 08:33 PM

As i sit here looking, watching, waiting.........

I see a bird fly off into the sky, and I
think, they've got it easy.

As I lie here looking, watching, waiting..........

A vision comes, of a bird flying away into the sky,
and as I was thinking, they've got it easy,

Well they haven't got it easy, they have
to watch for predators, just like me.
They have to eat, just like me.
And they have to watch, just like me........

As i lie here sleeping, dreaming, waiting.........

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anonymous albert ?

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since 2001-03-23

Posts 2979

1 posted 2001-05-11 09:52 PM

nice poem...i liked it

...thanks for sharing and keep writing...

...?

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TearsOfPearls
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since 1999-09-23

Posts 322
Vereeniging, South-Africa

2 posted 2001-05-12 04:18 PM

A very interesting poem...interesting style, interesting theme, I like it

Keep on writing.

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Acies

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Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-07

Posts 7665
Twilight Zone

3 posted 2001-05-16 09:48 AM

nice poem. very callm read. keep sharing. thanks for the read

"So long as men can breathe or eyes can see,
So long lives this, and this give life to thee." W.S.

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

4 posted 2001-05-17 02:49 PM

Yea this was extremely calm....very serene read. I completely enjoyed this one.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

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I admire it daily

Allan Riverwood

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since 2001-01-04

Posts 3502
Winnipeg

5 posted 2001-05-17 10:59 PM

Now you got me thinking about birds... I think you've tickled my muse. Expect to see a poem from me about birds in the near future.
Thanks for the inspiration! Needless to say this poem had an impact on me.
~Allan

Build a man a fire, and he's warm for a day. Set a man on fire, and he'll be warm for the rest of his life.
~Unknown

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