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Good Bye |
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The Lost Supertone Member
since 2001-01-20
Posts 74Winnipeg, Manitoba, Canada |
To laugh, To cry, To wonder, what would have been, what could have been, to wonder would be to much, to wonder would be fantasy to wonder would be reasonless, to wonder, to wonder, to think, to think of what would be, to think is to wonder, and to wonder is to think, can two things intertwine? and manything intertwine? can one thing stand alone? to try. Good Bye. [This message has been edited by The Lost Supertone (edited 01-22-2001).] |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
Woah, this is really good, I like how the style of this dominates your thoughts as you read it, it's so simple but complex. Great job on the poem  Goodbyes suck, don't do them man "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Lakewalker http://www.thehungersite.com |
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Allan Riverwood
since 2001-01-04
Posts 3502Winnipeg |
Not if they have been a long time coming, Lakewalker. That's all that i'm going to say. Some goodbyes need to be said. |
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The Lost Supertone Member
since 2001-01-20
Posts 74Winnipeg, Manitoba, Canada |
Oh bite me Brian your self rightous crap is really just plain anoying. You sound like a small child picking fights with someone who just plain dosn't care. Shesh get over it, cause no one else (includeing me) cares |
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IsGona Senior Member
since 2000-07-14
Posts 723 |
hmmm .Glad my name isn't Brian. Nice poem ~Jason "Every body has their destiny... I'LL CHOOSE MY OWN ~Hatebreed~ |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
nicely penned thoughts Super Saying goodbye is never easy, specially if it's to someone we care for The questions that surround each action great job Supertone keep sharing P.S. Everyone, let's not ruin/tarnish the beauty of the poem with these childish comment/arguements. Let's just enjoy the poem. I believe that it is really good  I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
I thought the poem itself was wonderful. I liked it a lot and unfortunately for us we lost what could have been a great member of passions......the lost supertone. Acire, talk to me on icq.....I have to ask you about something.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I'm in love with my shadow I admire it daily |
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Jenn Cirrincione
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl |
This is good, however, what is with the childish fighting recently?? I don't even get where it all stems from. We need to enjoy this place...sheesh!! Anyway, goodbyes are sad, and sometimes they suck.  Ok, I've rambled enough, xoxo Jenn "A person can never get over a broken heart if they aren't willing to let go of all of the pieces."-- ?? |
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