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The People At Passions Part 2
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The People At Passions Part 2 |
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Allysa 
since 1999-11-09
Posts 1952In an upside-down garden 
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There's Acire who won't tell us his real name, I guess he's kinda shy.  There's Brendon who has weird ideas, that make me wonder why.  There's Lakey who jumps around, between the many forums.  And Allan who won't roll around, all sorts of decorums.  There's those of you who make me blush, by offering up compliments.  Then there's the people who joke around, and appreciate life's merriment.  There's Dopey who's in his own class, with his smokin' smiley face.  And then there's all those people like Carly, with such interesting taste.  There's those of you, like Erin, who I never see anymore.  and those of you, like me, who think that life's a bore.  There's angels here, and devils too.  But no matter how different we all are, I love each and every one of you!  There's the "cool" ones I hang with, who write the coolest poems.  And then there's the welcome crew, who welcome new ones to our home.  There's people of many colors, sizes, shapes, and styles, and I hope that every one of you, stays her for a little while.   There might be more, I don't know. I know you're in a better place and though I cannot see your face, I know you're smiling down on me, saying everything's okay. ~R Kelly (I wish) |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
I see you trying to include and describe everyone somehow, great post  "Be kind for everyone you meet is fighting a harder battle" Plato. |
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Marshalzu
since 2001-02-15
Posts 2681Lurking |
Yeh... I thought this was a great loved the first part as well... very good use of smilies as well.Zu " The tree of liberty must be refreshed from time to time with the blood of patriots" -Thomas jefferson |
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Allysa
since 1999-11-09
Posts 1952In an upside-down garden |
There's those of you, like Marshalzu, I don't know all to well. But I'd like to know you better, so come out of your shell.  Sorry, couldn't think of a smilie I haven't used. Anyhow, thanks much! Muchos gracias! I know you're in a better place and though I cannot see your face, I know you're smiling down on me, saying everything's okay. ~R Kelly (I wish) |
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Marshalzu
since 2001-02-15
Posts 2681Lurking |
The most excellent thing ever written since I read how they made sliced bread or something like that... Great stuffZu |
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Linc
since 2001-03-07
Posts 552The Backstreet Boy |
hey, :'( aww this is so nice I loved it and it goes in my library until your next masterpiece -- Linc "Once you reach your original goal it seems that the journey was your real accomplishment." |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
ha ha Allysa I love it "So long as men can breathe or eyes can see, |
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Allan Riverwood
since 2001-01-04
Posts 3502Winnipeg |
Haha.... this is cute. Although I don't see how mine pertains to me, you did most of the others rather well. A cute thought. ~Allan Build a man a fire, and he's warm for a day. Set a man on fire, and he'll be warm for the rest of his life. |
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Low Man's Lyric Member
since 2001-04-03
Posts 236In a dream |
He he that was adorable. It was a smile lifter for me. Give her two red roses, each with a note. The first note says "For the woman I love" and the second, "For my best friend." |
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anonymous albert ?
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
ey...i liked this one as i did the first very creative...i enjoyed every words...keep writing.. ...?if i die before i wake , i pray the lord my soul will take-"when thugs cry" |
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Allysa
since 1999-11-09
Posts 1952In an upside-down garden |
Allan, you're just difficult like that. I know you're in a better place and though I cannot see your face, I know you're smiling down on me, saying everything's okay. ~R Kelly (I wish) |
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xShUgArHiGhx
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
Awww!! This was so cute!!! Heheheheh |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Yayyyy i'm in my own class! YAyyyy! I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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lonely*soul Member
since 2001-04-05
Posts 396east haddam (moodus) ct :) |
hehe i think dopes is exited..thats wickedly cutish... i wanna se a followup when u get to know more peeps k? *KiMMiE* |
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