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Celebi Junior Member
since 2001-04-20
Posts 17 |
Shut Down the earth Shut Down the country Shut Down the state Shut Down your town Shut Down your road Shut Down your house Shut Down your friends Shut Down your family Shut Down your car Shut Down your computer Shut Down your life Shut Down your mind...assuming you can find it Shut Down Inspired by sleep ~Celebi~ [This message has been edited by Celebi (edited 05-11-2001).] |
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Allysa 
since 1999-11-09
Posts 1952In an upside-down garden |
My friend Christine says it was a little confusing, but very well written. My comments are that I hope to read more that you write, and I will see you around. I know you're in a better place and though I cannot see your face, I know you're smiling down on me, saying everything's okay. ~R Kelly (I wish) |
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Marshalzu
since 2001-02-15
Posts 2681Lurking |
Cool poem Celebi well done I thought the concept was great... hope to see more of you in the future Zu " The tree of liberty must be refreshed from time to time with the blood of patriots" -Thomas jefferson |
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Allan Riverwood
since 2001-01-04
Posts 3502Winnipeg |
YEAH!    Shut it ALL down! ALL of it!   Spare no one!Mwa ha ha!  ~Allan Build a man a fire, and he's warm for a day. Set a man on fire, and he'll be warm for the rest of his life. |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
very interesting "So long as men can breathe or eyes can see, |
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vixengrl04 Member
since 2001-04-26
Posts 495East Haddam, CT |
You know what it's weird cuz I'm listening to a song and just at the part in the song where its like "I had to shut you down, I had to shut you down" is when I scrolled down and found this piece!! LOL, not that any of that matters....This was really interesting.  ~*Nikki*~ ~*Of all the millions of people in the world, I'm just me.*~ |
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xShUgArHiGhx
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
This one was very unique!! great read |
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lonely*soul Member
since 2001-04-05
Posts 396east haddam (moodus) ct :) |
shut it all down mauhahahaha newyas good job lol *KiMMiE* |
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anonymous albert ?
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
yea...i would do the same...so we all can be sitting in the dark doing nothing staring at a place where we think the light bulb is at wondering what the h** happened...LOL..haha yea i did enjoy this tho...thanks for the read...keep writing... ...?if i die before i wake , i pray the lord my soul will take-"when thugs cry" |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Well done on this! SHUT IT ALL DOWN! I enjoyed!  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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