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HappyPretender Junior Member
since 2001-03-06
Posts 38Prince George, VA |
Fight For Love I sit here crying I'm crying all night Holding steadfast to love Putting up a fight No one can stop Me loving you But when appealing to force We mustnt lose Don't let go Don't lose hope You'll always be Here in my heart. |
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Heavens Tears
since 2001-03-15
Posts 677 |
Dont worry Rachael. It's gonna be OK. Just fight for what you want, because you really deserve it! *~*Amanda*~* |
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Allan Riverwood
since 2001-01-04
Posts 3502Winnipeg |
I'm with her on this one.... whatever you want, just keep fighting. That way even if you fail, you'll be stronger for flexing your proverbial muscles a little bit.  Nice work, and it's good to see you posting again more often. I've missed reading your work. ~Allan Build a man a fire, and he's warm for a day. Set a man on fire, and he'll be warm for the rest of his life. |
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anonymous albert ?
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
nice job on the poem..and you shouldnt stop fighting..stay strong and keep writing..  ...?if i die before i wake , i pray the lord my soul will take-"when thugs cry" |
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Jenn Cirrincione
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl |
Stay strong is right.... if it's meant to be... a little help woudn't hurt the situation. Jenn "If it's wrong to love you, then my heart just won't let me be right, cause I'm drowned in you, and I won't pull through without you by my side." Mari |
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katherine Member
since 2000-06-10
Posts 365Canberra Australia |
keep fighting for what you want thats the only chance you have of getting it. katie if you don't let them in they can't see the real you |
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Ina Senior Member
since 2000-10-09
Posts 1236Quebec, Canada |
I agree with everyone. This was a great poem! all will be well Regina "Take a look at my face, there's no price I won't pay |
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knightlyshadows Senior Member
since 2001-04-14
Posts 791obscured vision |
jelloW yeas!!!!! fight hunnAy  great poem tiff  “A single choice can build destinies,or destroy them.” |
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LoneWolf Member
since 2001-03-10
Posts 384IL |
Wow i liked this a lot.it's a great poem. its another one for my library. keep fighting, never give up. It's too bad I'm not as wonderful a person as people say I am, because the world could use a few people like that. |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
This is really sweet and I do hope you get your wishes "So long as men can breathe or eyes can see, |
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Lovely_Kris Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 176 |
i think you did a great job and keep up the great work. Lovely_Kris |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Always fight for love and never give up until you're dead. I enjoyed this.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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