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HappyPretender
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0 posted 2001-05-11 12:39 PM


Fight For Love

I sit here crying
I'm crying all night
Holding steadfast to love
Putting up a fight
No one can stop
Me loving you
But when appealing to force
We mustnt lose
Don't let go
Don't lose hope
You'll always be
Here in my heart.

© Copyright 2001 Rachael - All Rights Reserved
Heavens Tears
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1 posted 2001-05-11 12:40 PM


Dont worry Rachael.  It's gonna be OK.  Just fight for what you want, because you really deserve it!

*~*Amanda*~*

My tears roll right down my cheeks, but they all soak into my pillow.  I feel kinda sorry for it...

Allan Riverwood
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2 posted 2001-05-11 06:09 PM


I'm with her on this one.... whatever you want, just keep fighting.  That way even if you fail, you'll be stronger for flexing your proverbial muscles a little bit.  
Nice work, and it's good to see you posting again more often.  I've missed reading your work.  
~Allan

Build a man a fire, and he's warm for a day.  Set a man on fire, and he'll be warm for the rest of his life.  
~Unknown

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3 posted 2001-05-12 12:55 PM


nice job on the poem..and you shouldnt stop fighting..stay strong and keep writing.. ...?

if i die before i wake , i pray the lord my soul will take-"when thugs cry"

Jenn Cirrincione
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4 posted 2001-05-12 07:45 AM


Stay strong is right.... if it's meant to be... a little help woudn't hurt the situation.

Jenn

"If it's wrong to love you, then my heart just won't let me be right, cause I'm drowned in you, and I won't pull through without you by my side." Mari

katherine
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5 posted 2001-05-12 09:17 AM


keep fighting for what you want thats the only chance you have of getting it.
katie

if you don't let them in they can't see the real you

Ina
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6 posted 2001-05-12 11:19 AM


I agree with everyone.

This was a great poem!

all will be well

Regina

"Take a look at my face, there's no price I won't pay
To say these words to you"bon jovi

knightlyshadows
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7 posted 2001-05-12 12:12 PM


jelloW yeas!!!!! fight hunnAy  
great poem
tiff

“A single choice can build destinies,or destroy them.”

"u say i only here wut i want too..."

LoneWolf
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8 posted 2001-05-12 01:34 PM


Wow i liked this a lot.it's a great poem. its another one for my library. keep fighting, never give up.

It's too bad I'm not as wonderful a person as people say I am, because the world could use a few people like that.

I've learned that even when you

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9 posted 2001-05-14 06:15 PM


This is really sweet and I do hope you get your wishes  

"So long as men can breathe or eyes can see,
So long lives this, and this give life to thee."  W.S.

Lovely_Kris
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10 posted 2001-05-14 08:28 PM


i think you did a great job and keep up the great work.
Lovely_Kris

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11 posted 2001-05-18 05:06 PM


Always fight for love and never give up until you're dead.
I enjoyed this.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

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