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Heavens Tears
since 2001-03-15
Posts 677
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Secrets burning away at my heart Pain burning away at my soul Blind attempts to set things right Scar my heart, and make me lose control Reaching for something to hold me up For something there to break my fall But my hands feel nothing there to grasp And nothing I do will help at all Falling down, screaming silently Hoping for someone to magically hear Silently screaming, invisible tears falling And no one can see them,even when they are near Some people seem to truly believe The tears I cry are contagious somehow They go away when my tears start to fall And this is why I am all alone now *~*Amanda*~* |
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Marshalzu 
since 2001-02-15
Posts 2681Lurking |
I liked this poem immensely, i'm kinda wondering why it's on page two? anyway good job  Zu " The tree of liberty must be refreshed from time to time with the blood of patriots" -Thomas jefferson |
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TearsOfPearls Member
since 1999-09-23
Posts 322Vereeniging, South-Africa |
Wow! Wow! Wow! I feel this poem, excellent job, keep it up. Planning big can be a gamble...I have already rolled the dice! |
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obscurity of cloud Member
since 2001-05-11
Posts 294....:::::******:::::.... |
"Scar my heart, and make me lose control" These are such powerful lines. Great writing, keep it up! "so when at times the mob is swayed to carry praise or blame too far, we may choose something like a star" --Frost |
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anonymous albert ?
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
i liked the poem..throughout...great job..and menaings of this poem...was awesome...keep writing...  ...?if i die before i wake , i pray the lord my soul will take-"when thugs cry" |
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xShUgArHiGhx
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
This is so sad!!! ::hugs:: |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Yea this is quite sad. I hope all goes well for you soon!  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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vixengrl04 Member
since 2001-04-26
Posts 495East Haddam, CT |
This was pretty sad, and I can relate for sure. I hope you get happy, but don't stop writing such great poems! ~*Nikki*~ ~*Of all the millions of people in the world, I'm just me.*~ |
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~*brittt*~ Member
since 2001-05-09
Posts 76East Haddam, CT |
This is so so so sad, but I can definetly relate. Just know that there are other people out there that feel like you, and these feeling will go away soon. Good job sweetie, I loved it. ~~brittt*~ If you live to be 100 years old, I want to live to be 101 so I never have to live a day without you. |
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thedarkangel Member
since 2001-05-12
Posts 74~*~the cutest~*~ |
know the feeling. sucks a little but time passes and wounds heal. great poem by the way love peace and eyeliner angel -x- Each Moment in time is a pinprick in eternity-Marcus Aurilius |
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Poet on Acid Member
since 2001-01-07
Posts 325Florida, USA |
Good work at capturing a feeling here. It is kinda bad when people are afraid to be there when someone really needs them. Fear is a powerful thing though. "It's too cold in the world...too cold to be alone..." - >¶Øʆ< |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
quite sad thru beautifully expressed words and feelings. keep it up I'm so sorry for doubting you Kit ... please forgive me!!!! |
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